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Short and to the point
Another fine story from JPB. The storyline has been used before but Bob made it his own.
Thanks for the good read
JPB has returned to his roots....
Bravo to the master. I would have him sent the pictures and video to all her family....!
Solid basic story
No surprises in this story. Barry does the classic stupid drunken fuck. I usually believe that the first instance of something like that is forgivable but it's up to the spouse. Randi, abetted by her friend who hates her husband, takes the tack of getting vicious revenge. That's never the way to put a marriage back together and Barry's reaction is predictable and fair.
What always gets me in these type of stories is the wife's reaction when the husband initiates the divorce. They think they are justified in their nasty revenge and can't believe that they are going to be divorced. It's hard for me to accept how clueless they are. Of course they have been driven by their anger and that supposedly makes them crazy. In a broader sense I would have trouble staying with someone who's reaction to personal issues was to go crazy and attempt to hurt me as much as possible. Who needs to be in a relationship with a person like that?
Like most JPB stories this was well written and an easy read. The characters are vivid and stay true to their developed personalities. A solid story.
ummm...what hapenned?
to JPB, i mean. this story is not like his'. i mean i like it. but did some creature from outer space crawled up his ass into his brain?
Was she safe?
Wonder if either women has aids? Both had fucked before....
I appreciate JPB always runs the gamut with his stories and you never know what you'll get next.
These are the stories I like. No cucks, but not extreme in dealing with the disrespect. Divorce is handled in a pragmatic fashion and the protagonist moves on.
Thanks for sharing. You really are a very good writer even if I don't like the way all of your storiues turn out.
But where exactly has this
story taken us. certainly not into new territory. Please can we have some creativity and some new plots?
Funny how all the LW revenge freaks love this story
Because the good ol' boy divorces her, despite the fact that the husband's infidelity was the cause of the problems. Oh sorry, I forgot - in LW world, men fucking around doesn't count. Only wives.
WHERE IS THE REVENGE?? anyone see any?
HOW ...exactly... is getting a divorce from a vile lying cheating cunt whore "Revenge?"
thats is Just survival. Only the Turd that goes by the name JPB could fuck up this story
For once Harry missed the ball . . .
Harry is usually right on the money, but not this time. The revenge was Randi's (the name in the title should have been spelled, "Randi," not "Randy"). I'm sure that JPB did not mean to infer that Barry (the husband) was the one who was getting revenge. Barry simply got a divorce to be rid of Randi, whose "revenge" was way over the top and poisoned their marriage.
Randi tried to get revenge against Barry, who, without premeditation, found himself in the sack with the wife of Tom, the person with whom Barry was negotiating a business contract. Randi's revenge backfired on her when Barry walked. End of story. And as others have said, it has been done before but this was a bit different and it was a fun read just the same.
JPB appears to have reformed. Instead of weak-willed, bisexual, cuckold males we actually have a man who has a pair. Thanks for writing.
there's fucking around and then ther's fucking around
Great. Your right on.
Sorry, anonymous missed his identification of her ongoing cheating!
He did mess up. However, he was able to discern her previous and ongoing affair. He did not suffer from severe cranial rectalitise!
Is this a rewrite? I have read this story before.
Not bad.
Good, But Just One Thing
The revenge wasn't harsh enough. He should release the picts to her family anyway. She deserves it.
JPB, you finally wrote a decent story!
I gave it 5 Stars! Can you believe that?
Probably one of your best
This story went just about how it should. Not over the top, no second chances, just do what you have to do and get on with life.
Roflmao@Harry
When will you learn Harry, you first have to engage the brain, before putting your fingers into gear and on the keyboard? This is of course, assuming that you have a brain?
Nice solid story Bob, short and sweet. As some have said, no twists or turns, just straight down the line.
I got to the end and thought, Hmmm, not bad this was a solid four star effort for sure." Then I read Harry's comment and couldn't help myself. I had to give you the extra one.
Don't bother emailing me to say thanks, you can email Harry and thank him instead.
Thanks Bob for the story and Harry for the laugh, all the best for Christmas.
Amanda
JPB nails one
Great story. Concise, no wimps and a realistic level of revenge. Good job!
You're "Heroes" have evolved from Cuckolds
to Bigots?!? You are a man among men, JPB.
BETTER NEXT TIME?
I DIDN'T LIKE THIS AS MUCH AS OTHER STUFF YOU'VE WRITTEN - BUT PLEASE WRITE MORE!
YESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!
This was just great! Your becoming amazing JPB!!
once again stop using the black guys as the bad guys
his wife was a slut to start with, and no one gives a fuck about how you feel about interracial couple but to keep making black guys the ones you hate is fuck up and so are you. You lost a fan.
All this fear about being called a racist is political correctness gone wild.
The fact is, just as black women resent white women dating and marrying black men, white men resent black men dating and marrying white women. That is because both black women and white men are disadvantaged when white women and black men date and marry. You witnessed the resentment black women have in the OJ case.
When a white girl dates a white guy, you don't know if is a sexual relationship. However, you know if a white girl dates a black guy they are having sex.
Almost all white women want white babies. However, when it come to sex half the white girls have or prefer sex with black guys and sometimes because they don't want to be called racist. And, since there are 7 whites to every black, black guys have more white pussy then white guys.
There is not much young white guys can do if young white girl date black guys except to ostracize her and label or her a "nigger loving slut" (excuse the language) and refuse to date and marry her.
There are a high enough percentage of white that will not marry a young white girl that dates black guys and a much higher percentage if the white girl has a mixed race baby. That doesn't prevent the white girl from marry a white guy but it limits her options and in effect makes her less desirable to young white guys.
I remember a teenage blonde girl bragging about having sex with a black guy and claiming how much better the sex was. If you don't think greatly decreased her desirability for marriage in the eyes of young white males, I have a bridge to sell you.
JPB IS NOT A RACIST!!
This racist battle cry is getting really old really fast. A rose by any other name ,, same with a person of the Black persuasion..
ANGRY, MAD PEOPLE
sometimes dont go overboard on retribution and punishment. TK U MLJ LV NV
JPB!!!!
Keep them coming. This one was a little weak but still an entertaining read.
Good Story
Other than the racist aspect it was a good story. Revenge fucks never work, especially in front of your spouse. The wife got what she had coming to her, an ex-husband.
HA HA HA
Not racist
Story was fairly short and entertaining, if not a bit sad. I agree that JPB is not guilty of blatant racism. The rationale for Jamal being not just Negroid, but dark black in color, is Sweety's (with Wanda-Bitch help) wish to maximize Hubby's discomfort. Hubby, by his own admission, still has some residual racist leftovers from his youth. Notice that Jamal is not reported as being a massive stallion in overall size, and no claims of 13" pecker 3" thick. (good recovery IS mentioned, but he is young and it was during the inaugural episode, and might have involved Wanda's additional attentions!) His language is Street Black but is realistic, given the Glock.
This one is good
Usually you write some wimpish or semi-wimpish stories.
This one is semi-good.
It would be even nicer if the hubby would put couple of bullets into whore and the black asshole - o well, you just can hope
I would
have still the pics to everyone. There was no signed contract just a verbal agreement. Like the verbal agreement about forsaking all others made on the wedding day.
You always finish your stories without payback to the bitches
How about a BTB story
It Is BTB
He knew she would end up at Wanda's and obviously Wanda was into Blacks.
The payback (BTB) is that now everyone pretty much knew she was a whore and doing blacks. Will he ever use the videos...hmmm, maybe - if her or one of her customers attempts to give him trouble, otherwise, her once happy married life is over and the road to misery is well under way...can you say Police blotter, prostitution record, no insurance for Doctor and Hospital care - wait, they can't cure Aids!
So...yes, she is burned!
all are scum in this
Drunk is not an excuse for cheating. At any given moment there are 10 million people on the planet that are drunk(look it up) yet only a very small percentage of them cheat. If someone cheats when drunk, then they'll do it sober. It's just that cheaters think drunkenness is a legitimate excuse and a get out of jail free card. Well, it's neither.
Revenge is not an excuse either. If someone cheats for revenge, then they will think up ANY reason to need revenge. They will cheat anyway. I mean, if hubby murdered some stranger, would wifey be justified to do the same just to be even?
Therefore, EVERYONE in this story is a cheating piece of shit - hubby AND wife.
A DOUBLE SET-UP
and only one sucker to fleece. TK U MLJ LV NV
randy's revenge
any white woman who fucks a black man needs to be shot
Where is
the revenge? I guess our hero and Wanda were on the same flight home from NY? Silly.
Getting Even
What, he accepts ONE blow job, and she has multiple fucks and pussy-eating, including right in front of him, on multiple days, and that's EVEN?
And that's forgetting the race angle, which as much as he himself admits is racist is STILL something he feels, and she KNEW it, and deliberately did it to add to his "punishment">
My Bad
Okay, it was more than a blow job, but it was STILL her doing him, not the other way around.
Lucky Guy
A real loving wife would not have acted so quickly or even considered cheating!
She didn't seem to be too bright...staying with Wanda when hubby knew who and what Wanda was. Still, he was patient but true to her lack of common sense...she brings home the stud...well, closet slut out of the closet and all it took was a good friend (a big slut) to show her the way so...hubby was lucky - no kids and a wake up call!
Oh, he was guilty, when he woke up with the red head, he should have stopped everything and so the old saying, already did it - guilty so...might as well...'Cheating'!
Okay, he lacked morals and maybe(?) wouldn't cheat again but he did and...once a cheater...well...
Randi...total slut and short of losing a comfy life style, she is enjoying herself with Wanda and slutting a lot so...they should both be happy!
2ndThoughts
Well that's one sure way to screw up a marriage!
He wasn't exactly innocent. He could have pushed Marsha off. And been quick thinking enough not to escort her to the door where the world could see them. He still might expect some backlash from screwing a clients wife. But his marriage is toast. Randi WAY over reacted for someone that seemingly wanted her marriage to continue. Or was it just her meal ticket that she wanted to continue. It seemed unclear whether or not she worked. But one lingering question. If he was feeling so bitter and vindictive why didn't he send the videos to everyone they knew after the divorce was final so that everyone knew why they divorced and then why didn't he send the Police a random tip and try to get Wanda and Randi arrested for prostitution? That would have been a nice touch of revenge. He could have visited her in jail and told her how good she looked in orange.
uh huh
I gave this a 4 star rating because I feel there were a few things missing. I mean I see where she got revenge on her husband, But if he was so pissed off he should have sent the videos to everyone they knew including her family. Also he could have informed the police of the goings at Wanda's house. Or found some black guy with AIDS and paid him to go over and to fuck his ex-wife and spread the love around. Just saying.
As always when you turn to this genre...
...you do excellent work. I see no reason to deny anything but 4 stars. You are a gifted author - as long as you keep from gloryfying cuckoldry.
What a Twat!
Barry should take the photos and video he took of Randi's fuckfest with Jamal and mail to her parents,sisters and brothers,boss and co-workers,and anyone else she knows where it would be embarrassing to her. Of course they also need to be posted on Hamster,Porn Hub,etc
Burn the fucking bitch!!!
ps : Wanda needs to be punished too! BIG time!!!
Nothing wrong with it
Except the author is a racist piece of shit.
Racist?
Just because a character is a racist doesn't mean the author is.
Anon 5-12-16 must be a leftist.
Playing the race card at least once per day is standard Liberal training.
Don't these people know that that black stuff rubs of on them?
Niggers are every where you look.
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