All Comments on 'Kevin's Photography'

Great loved it !! wish it was longer hopefully there will be more!

keep writing more of this

She was very turned on by the site of him

Could use a bit of editing, but keep writing...

keep going more...to many negative people we are here to read erotic stories and you are doing just that.....keep them and me coming

great story

very realistic thats what they do best

loved the throat thing, could have been longer

good job

asweetdick

You sure can stir the juices with your stories, Thanks.

Got the expect response fromthis old man. Even at 45, I still got it up twice withthis and your oter submissions.

Working on my own submission based on facts of my latest trip to the large bike rally in Sturgis, SD. She was 24 and I picked her up on my way.

Best trip ever and dispite the age diff (20 years), shehung on my arm the whole rally. Damn was she hot!!!

Love the mature and incest/taboo categories. Ignore the grammer cops and keep writing

Lee

You could really build this into a story several pages long. Very good plot and believable.