All Comments on 'Rainbow Bumper Sticker'

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scenttoscenttoover 13 years ago
Quick and to the point

This was a very erotic and quick read. I would have liked a more detailed description of both women's looks and bodies. That would have given me more time to masturbate before reaching the end of the story. ha ha

estragonestragonover 13 years ago
Real characters

Fast paced, hot without being overly "Grey's Anatomy".

SapphoLustSapphoLustabout 13 years ago
A potent quick erotic story

Yes it could've been longer, more detailed. Sometimes the thought that spawns another person's imagination is the best.

It made me realize that I don't define eye movement enough, so you taught me something here in that quick , erotic moment of lust turning to love...

can you tell I like your style:)

please keep writing!

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 7 years ago
Very hot!

Nice and hot story, thanks for sharing it with us!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
10/10

I’m gay.

She’s gay.

She’s also gay.

Everyone’s gay.

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