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I like this one.
The innocent imagery works. In recommendations.
mine?
I don't believe we've ever met, this is a 100, compare the two, This is novel.
A synopsis, no a novel
I agree with 12 0 1, it's a novel, who says how long a novel should be?
This poem keeps going forward steadily, without surprises. But then, it doesn't need them. Very smooth reading, beautiful feeling at the end.
This...
...is the best kind of erotic poem; both sweet and sexy. So good.
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