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Becoming a Slut Wife: Charlotte

byJust Plain Bob©
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by Anonymous

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by Britease12/20/10

OK

Good luck

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by Vulcan_in_Ohio12/20/10

As usual, we are left hanging

I think endings can be difficult and JPB has an effective solution -- just don't write one.

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by lawrenc12/21/10

No luck

I refuse to wish you luck as you are into total betrayal.

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by Mandy0112/21/10

Roflmao

Okay Bob, is this to make up for the other stories that I couldn't write a sequel to?

Hmmm, wish me luck!

Amanda

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by digdaddyrich12/21/10

Bob can surely stir the readers imagination

Well done, a very explicit story of a real slut. Perhaps she will get all of the cock she wants and still keep her husband in the dark about her cheating. I think eventually her pussy will show the signs of all of the wear and tear she has from fucking so much.

Thanks for the read

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by LordSlamdawgg05/31/12

great tawdry story in soiled dove vein !

I'm shaking my head at how JPB manages to have his literary cake & eat it too. This character condems amorality in theory, but lives hedonistically. No smutty, slutty detail is missed. At the end , the cheeky cow asks us, the readers, to wish her luck in furthering her deceptions- no lack of chuptzah here !

It's hilarious & spooky as one. A typical melange of disconcerting emotions that is but one of this author's stock skills in trade to evoke in a reader struggling gamely & shamefully to follow his mixed messages.

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by Anonymous03/31/15

It amazes me that she thinks Steve doesn't know

Even an idiot knows the difference between a woman that's ready to have sex and one that's just douched and ready to have sex. You don't think there is a difference? She's toast when Steve asks her why she needed to douche.

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by Anonymous11/26/15

loving wives???

When does RAPE equate love? JPB has hit an all time low (sorry to say)

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by christmas_ape04/19/16

slut!

wife!

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by Anonymous06/17/16

Thank You, Anonymous

I hate and detest stories that make rape turn into an insatiable slut. A woman enjoying the unbelievable pain of anal sex is as believable as a man being sodomized having an orgasm. Only happens in poorly written erotic fiction.

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