All Comments on 'Amy Ch. 01'

But it will certainly cause its protagonist to be branded as a wimp.

My reaction here is more like.... What is going on here??? And why doesn't

he do anything. His beating off to his memory of what he saw suggest that I will be having a violent negative reaction in the future....

But I do wonder what's going to happen. Don't mind a bit of cuckolding to get the story going, but I hope it doesn't end like that.

and does nothing is a wimp. Simple

you sick fuckers move to fetish/group sex / IR ?!!

we all know where this is going , hubby will be a sick faggot voyeur and allow it . Author said she was trying to make it from a mans perspective .... she failed miserably as no MAN with self respect or any testosterone at all would just sit there and take that shit .! Your a cuck writer with total contempt for monogamy . " once you go black ... your never welcome back " might as well fuck a great dane or chimp .

1 star.

Poot little cunt. Can't take it like a man? Gotta come onto our site and let off a little steam? Wanker.

I suggest you read the story entitled "Loving Wives Is Intended to Be Ironic."

Not bad writing but your story line Makes him a Wimp. I Hope you next chapter is better and he becomes more of a man and gets revenge on her.

Saw you coming right at the start when you wrote that she was dating a black man and that no one cared anymore. Personally, I don't either but it didn't go unnoticed that there seem to be more than just a little innuendo here so - we're right - you have a low self esteem or, at least, your character does.

You wanted suggestions for a second chapter and more - Okay - here it is...stop - don't do it!!!

What do I think so far of the story? Stop fucking around with the keyboard and go sweep the kitchen floor, that way you are doing something that you don't suck at

At the point he started getting turned on, it went downhill fast. You wanted to write from a man's point of view? You have a pretty poor opinion of men. Idiotic rascist ideology aside, why do you think a man would get off on his wife's infidelity? This wasn't even by consent or mutual agreement, but by deception and abandonment of marital vows. Is the author okay with this behavior?

I think it would be more interesting to read a story from the perspective of the female who has been caught in the situation you've written about. Most of the "Loving Wife" stories in Literotica seem to be from the cuckolded male point of view.

As if everyone doesn't know where your going with this story, you would blow him if you could get rid of your wife.

As many a mans delight ...seeing his wife enjoying something he cannot provide, a large black cock. Continue his arousal and lets see how it ends. !!

when you choose to write IR SHIT YOU LABLE IT.............

Crap and written poorly to boot.

Other than being a total piece of slut-wife, cuckold cum-sucking husband sh*t; it's not too bad. Wait a minute; that's wrong; this is a piece of unmitigated crap; and that's its only good feature. Put this in Interracial, Fetish, or anywhere but in Loving Wives.

PLEASE DO NOT MAKE HIM A CUCKHOLD, LETS SEE IF HE CAN STAND UP AND BE A MAN. AND WHY IS SHE FUCKING AROUND ON HIM UNPROTECTED, I HOPE YOU CAN MAKE THIS ALL WORK IN THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Doesn't sound like it. Dwight and Amy appear to have an affair going on. I, too, am distressed by his actions/non-actions. He watches for an hour, masturbates, and then calls her to tell her he will be late - letting her know she doesn't have to stop fucking Dwight? Unbelievable!<P>

And she has unprotected sex with him? Not only does she disrespect her husband and the marriage, she also endangers him. Or do you think Dwight is only screwing her? Did you catch the fact she was still screwing Dwight at about the time hubbie was due home? And the snide innuendo about "working on something real hard?" Big time disrespect. If she has a thing for black cock it makes you wonder why she bothered to marry him?<P>

Well so far we only have his POV...and not much of that. It is still hard to tell where the story is going. Is he a cuck who enjoys watching other men screw his wife? Don't know. Nothing in the story would lead to that conclusion - he appears to be a fairly mainsteam kind of guy - up until he discovers what's going on. No previous swinging or sharing. On the other hand he does not rush in and break it up. So does his "dealing with it" mean? Confronting her? Ignoring the elephant in the room? Exacting revenge? Okay I will read one more chapter to find out.<P>

One good thing - Mr. Collins has already stood on the brink of the abyss and survived: He has lost a wife and daughter to death. Losing Amy to adultery, while painful and heart wrenching, just doesn't seem to measure up.<P>

Thanks for sharing.

I have many accounts. I'm going to start using all of them to vote 5's for stories like this!!!!!

Hurry up with part 2!

The next chapter should have the Cuckolded hubby sucking the wifes nigger lovers cock and getting fucked up the ass with the niggers cock and then have the nigger fuck the wife in front of the wimp cuckold and let her get pregnant. That's what happens when niggers fuck white married women. They breed them and make the white husband pay for and bring up all the little mixed race bastards. Happens all the time.

I think you show a talent for writing but I just can't identify with your husband in this story. No man would tolerate this level of disresect from his wife or a postal service employee. In other words, he would have gone postal on their asses.

like so many would be trash writers, is using the "loving wives" genre to get attention. You will attract the wimpy cuckold lovers, who will shower you with praise, but for the most part you will be bashed and trashed by the loving wives reader. Too bad this site doesn't have a "slut wife" category. ML

Shot and sweet---TOTAL CRAP!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry slut but a real husband and man would have handled this shit right there, 99% of husbands are not coward wimp cockolds.

A total waste of electricity to run the pc to read this crap.

Total crap. A man would have he slut ass alone out on the street before she could blink.

You say you wanted to serifs from a mans perspective and then you wrote from the Petersburg of a gay wimp. What's up with that? Do you really believe a man would tolerate this crap? Would a woman? No freaking way.

Interesting and effective writing, and a good shot at stepping into hubby's role.

Hope to see more from you.

Why is it that so many authors in "loving wives" depict the husbands as being turned on when they see their beloved wives in an adulterous situation? This story is so similar to countless others, that one senses that all are written to a formula. Why is it that the husbands -- almost to a man -- get turned on by what most of us would find to be cause for rage and demanding of immediate retribution? Why can't the authors -- and some of you are perspicacious -- not understand that we want the husband to grab a baseball bat, or load his S&W 38 and get immediate revenge on the offender? And then kick the slut of a wife out onto the street?

I have nothing against the husband who sees the offense, is deeply disturbed psychologically, but who eventually becomes reconciled with the errant wife, so long as the offending male is dealt with severely. Why do you assume that we want the husband to slaver over adultery? Especially lif the offender is a black guy with a monster dick? Why?

He wont be one for long if he can park his delivery truck for hours.

Ah yes, the emotions a man truly feels when finding his wife is with another man. I enjoy reading about the emotional roller coaster of new cuckolds.

next he would have a craving for the black cock up his ass!! What a sick asshole.

I'm not sure you're in the right category and judging from some of the downright rude comments maybe not but your writing is good. The visualizations are effective and the story is believable. Almost get the sense that the wife is still missing her deceased husband and entering into a pseudo-relationship to recapture her loss.

Would like to see more dialogue between the lovers though.

I think you captured the mind set of a husband walking in on his wife fucking some big black cock pretty well - it certainly worked for me! Very good. Ken xx

You are a sick braindead cunt. As is Syd and Queerlakequeen. I hope you all catch AIDS and DIE very painfully you pathetic FAGS.

you can forget about the hardon from watching his wife cheat. It doesn't happen like that. More like a 2 X 4 across the back of the head.

Eat shit and die!

I'm going to read Ch 2 at least far enough to find out if the man you wrote has balls.

I have not read Ch. 02 yet but I wanted to comment on this part first. The writing is not bad but the category is wrong. It is clear that there is a significant emphasis on a white woman with a black man here. She married a black man originally, and now is having adulterous sex with a black postman. Judging by most of the other stories in this author's bio, it seems the author has a fixation on the interracial theme, and that's a much better category for this story in my opinion. Of course, I also agree with the many comments that the author is not representing the point of view of most males, not even close. The percentage of men who would be sexually excited while watching their wives commit adultery is very, very small. So this story lacks credibility.

and think about lessons, planning and failure to learn. Both. TK U MLJ LV NV

Just another Mudshark story! Disgusting and in the wrong category...Mudsharks are bottom feeders you know!!!

Did I mention mindless and uninviting too?

Whore for the.mythical bbc makes cuck of wimpy husband. Never seen that before.

all of a sudden i am so turned on by a cheating whore with his cum in her .... not happening. it was written well up to that point