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by Lord_Gro12/25/10

Major error

Your story never explains who Sharon is, and what her relation is to the narrator. Which would then tell us why he cares that she seems to be strongly attracted to him. As it is, all we have is a vivid fantasy of the narrator having sex with someone other than the woman he has just married.

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by InMyWords12/26/10

Major error...

You're absolutely right. In my attempt to get this story admitted, I revised it and sent the wrong copy. Another copy has the name "Sharon" mentioned in the first paragraph. She is the woman who recounts her dream to the groom in front of everyone at the wedding reception. Sorry for the confusion...it'll never happen again, I assure you!

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