All Comments on 'I Pretend'

I've been there. Well written. Enjoyed it.

Thanks

I can't relate, having be married forever to a man who's home ever night, but I loved the imagery.

I smell the musky male scent

You always leave on the sheets,

And still feel the tingling sensations

I can't wait for you to repeat.

My only query is the sheets/repeat rhyme in this stanza. It snapped me out of the dreamy mood the of poem and into awareness of the rhyme. I am not sure what word would work better (maybe replicate). This is a minor quiblle though. I love this poem.

Five stars, but shouldn't it be lightning?