All Comments on 'The Dock'

by Chiara23

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Loved it!!

Please continue as I can't wait to read the remaining chapters.

eaglemonkeaglemonkover 13 years ago
very good story

I would like to know how the story goes on. this was a very good story.

MetallicPrincessMetallicPrincessover 13 years ago

Loved it! please continue!

bb4lsbb4lsabout 13 years ago
Chapter 2??????

I hope there will be a second chapter.

I don't know that int needs more people, but needs to be explored further.

Great story Chiara!

hotjavaguyhotjavaguyover 12 years ago
Great story! Got me off

Chiara, Loved the detail and the back story saving her from drowning and having wanted to be with her so long. I think this could be a very erotic love story with more great sex that Nicky's dad can never find out about.

Rugrat60Rugrat60about 10 years ago
Nicely Done

Liked the story. You have a way of bringing the characters out and still keep the erotic flavor going. Stimulating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I loved this story

curt6986curt6986almost 2 years ago

really great story I loved it 5 stars.

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