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Hostile Ch. 05

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by anonymousssss12/27/10

Keep it coming!!

I've enjoyed this series greatly. The pacing is perfect and your character development is spot on. Thank you for your wonderful work!!

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by Anonymous12/27/10

great

thank you for this story cant wait for more

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by J0SE12/27/10

Really great!

The end had me laughing my ass off!! Please do keep writing many more chapters!

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by donalde12/27/10

very enjoyable story

very enjoyable an d well written story looking forward to future chapters

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by Anonymous12/27/10

loving it

please keep writing "Hostile" I've read every chapter... it getting better with each chapter. continue on with the series.

Will Alie and Jake get together or will her fear of men keep them apart. Who was the person who shot down Jake? Will they come after them

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by Anonymous12/29/10

Reader66

I never expected to want to read a new installment every day on this site. Your story not only has interesting character developement, but includes a twist of dealing with male abuse of women. I love seeing the kind man change her opinion of men. I can't wait for the next installment!

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