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Very good start.
I enjoyed reading your story, it needs to be continued. Please do so.
please continue!
A good start but it seemed short and sort of unfulfilling. I hope you write more chapters, keep up the good work!
Im with unanamous.
Good writing, but bad ending, should have finished the story better,,
Smooth and Sensual
Very hott! Needs to be continued... maybe you can have another experience to provide more writing material? Liked it a lot.
Please do more...loved it.
Please do more...loved it.
video version
You should turn this story into a porn video... just saying, you sound like you can do porno's it would be great to see a porno vid version of this.
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