this is a beautiful story but it would help if you stuck with one character's view or at least specify which one your changing to in the different places. or maybe mark off where your different scenes are. i almost felt like i could connect with her at times. i've been raped before so i understand how she felt at first.
I as I went to mark them off they didn't actually come through. On my original copies everything is marked at the transition points.
And I am sorry. That should have never happened to you.
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Anonymous09/29/12
Story still not complete
I realized before finishing the previous story, they were probably brother and sister - now complete the story. They have different last names and so it shouldn't become an issue to marry. Maybe the parents should hook up again and the four of them live in one house. That way if father and daughter or mother and son want to fuck they can and nothing is behind anyone's back. Think about it.
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it felt so real. just like my life.
this is a beautiful story but it would help if you stuck with one character's view or at least specify which one your changing to in the different places. or maybe mark off where your different scenes are. i almost felt like i could connect with her at times. i've been raped before so i understand how she felt at first.
My bad
I as I went to mark them off they didn't actually come through. On my original copies everything is marked at the transition points.
And I am sorry. That should have never happened to you.
Story still not complete
I realized before finishing the previous story, they were probably brother and sister - now complete the story. They have different last names and so it shouldn't become an issue to marry. Maybe the parents should hook up again and the four of them live in one house. That way if father and daughter or mother and son want to fuck they can and nothing is behind anyone's back. Think about it.
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