All Comments on 'Girlfriend in Control'

I like it a lot. Keep going

You have a very good start to your story. I can't help but wonder just how Mrs. Lawson will react? Please keep it going.

Hope you keep the story going.

I really enjoyed this one! Thank you for this tale, saucy and funny at the same time - nicely done!

I can't believe how good this is. This might be my all time favorite story. Please, please, please keep this story going.

I am a CD submissive to Dominas, and am hugely excited by their humiliaitng me with words and required behavior. I also very much enjoy serving and submitting publically (in front of fellow-kinksters, NOT the vanilla public).

While this is the first story on L'tica in this catefory I've read, the first installyment if very exciting to me, in a subtle non-directly D/s kind of way.

Off I go to Part II : )

This story sounds as though it actually happened! And, it is an easy read, not too long with just enough details. I will be proceeding to the next chapter as soon as I finish this comment. Will the neighbor and the girl friend get together...so many possibilities...keep up the good work!

I've read every chapter but this is my favorite. I really hope you'll write a new story. I keep checking just in case you feel creative.

Hee! Fun.

Outstanding! This is a fantasy of mine too but no way I'd dare go naked outdoors.