- All
Comments (6) - Add a
Comment
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
Hmmmm
I'll read chapter 2. Is it coming right along? Have always enjoyed your stories.
great start
OK. You got my attention. Please send more.
Nice Smooth Start
Everything is up in the air.
Weeelllll....
Kinda hard to vote. Not a lot happening so far. However, I have complete faith in our noble author that all will be wrapped up neatly .... eventually. Anyway, thanks for another fine Wanderer tale, sir.
DC
MINERVA CH.01
OH ! A very good beginning and using a very common man's language. I am sure the story I am going to read will be equally intriguing as indicated in this first chapter.
A good start
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Minerva Ch. 01 of 10 or
More submissions by Denham_Forrest.