It's funny that I didn't remember any party's of mine that ended like yours. I was usually solo and than talked to RALPH. I liked your splitting the story into small paragraphs, it was easy to read. good job. Jack
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A slice of life
It's funny that I didn't remember any party's of mine that ended like yours. I was usually solo and than talked to RALPH. I liked your splitting the story into small paragraphs, it was easy to read. good job. Jack
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