What Just Happened?

Shorr and sweet!

Your the kinda guy I'd enjoy tilting a couple brews back with. BTW I'm paying so leave the shot gun at home
Lol

works

better than what he could've imagined.

Another winner.

Double D is the master of irony!

Bob himself is...not a nice guy. The prank calls I can dismiss as teenage stupidity, but dating a girl who's already got a boyfriend? That's more the girl's fault than his, but still...

Nevertheless, his plans succeeded literally beyond his wildest imagination. He simply couldn't expect something like that...

Surprising, is what I would call the ending.

Pretty good and funny!

Well done - got to like a decent revenge story to counter balance all the garbage that Britease & JPB spew.

He couldn't get anymore revenge than that.

Just let them kill each other. She killed him and the law will kill her. Sweet...

Thanks for the read.

fantastic

a bit short but good

Nice Flash Story

i am sure that Papatoad will put this one on his site. I wonder if she would have used the shotgun on Bob without the BF as a target? This wife I would really have liked to learn more about!

Good one

I liked it.

did you get a hardon writing this?

You have the right to bear arms, but you should think about the right to remain silent.
Every girl wants a husband who would kill her if she was unfaithful..your wife is a lucky girl.

5 stars

Very good. The cheating slut/whore killed her lover. Well done. Cuckolded husband 1 Cuckqueen and lover 0.

And the cuckold wimp asshole that wrote this:

"did you get a hardon writing this?
You have the right to bear arms, but you should think about the right to remain silent.
Every girl wants a husband who would kill her if she was unfaithful..your wife is a lucky girl."

Someone should use the right to bear arms on your candy sick ass. Go read your cuckold wimp swinging stories and leave DD and his stories alone.

I Don't Think You Should Write Stories About Just Plain Bob

Your stories are so much better than his, so why would write such a great story featuring him? Did he pay you? You know Bob loves it when somebody screws his wife, cause he always goes for the cream pie and sloppy seconds, so you better hope he doesn't write any stories about you.

Great, quick read

Very clever plot and very well written. Terrific short story.

nice completed package

Good quick read worth the time to read
well done

Nicely Done

A very good story, short and to the point with an excellent ending, nicely done.

dead lover and dead marriage for her, that works! And she'll be off to jail, too.

YOU GOT A DEAD SKUNK

in the middle of the living room AND YOU ARE HAPPY. TK U MLJ LV NV

yup

That was clever...bill


U are a good writter, write alot more PLEASE

I liked this story.......

It had all the parts needed for a good story....thanks.

Lol ...

I love this story ! Lol.... I was on the floor laughing my ass off at the ending... Although short I still enjoyed it immensely

Maybe a follow up?

I would love to see a follow up where he visits her in prison and lets her know that he fooled her. Lol

#2 BANG BANG

my baby shot him down, TK U MLJ LV NV

Holy Crapolla!

ROTFLMFAO!!!!!!!

Thx

why didn't she shoot his dick off??/

This is a hilarious story!

Bada bing,

Bada BANG!!!

Loved it! Great flash story.

smooth

nicely played!

Oh Yeah

And that's the name of that tune. Got rid of two with one shot.

HA Ha ha

HA!

Well played. One of funniest I've read here.

BOOM!

And that's how you open up the giant can of WHOOP ASS on someone. Only this time, you got a two for one deal! Nice story.

Peng!

I laughed heartily. Short, but well done. 4*

#2 BANG BANG

my baby shot him down, TK U MLJ LV NV

DD Does It Again!

I had tears of laughter running down my face! DD is challenging JPB as the King of Twisted! LOL

Holy shit that hurts =

Oh wait the good guy lived heh.

She was probably telling the truth and was good "until" but then it was only until -

Fry

Yup...

It pays to have good friends...a five from me.

Exactly

Why I don't dare let my wife have a key to the gun safe! Knee jerk reactions...

If Only

If only all the scum I knew would kill each other the days would be that much brighter!

Good story...

Short but good story...The way to get rid off of a cheating wife and a false friend...

If Only!

If only something like this could happen. Divorce would be so much easier. Short but to the point. I enjoy stories that have a twist like this, you have trouble figuring out what is about to happen...and I admit, I was way off base on this story. This author definitely is original and creative and must have a great imagination. Thank You for a wonderful story.

I find it hard to believe

that she never cheated or that she was shooting at Jack. I think the recoil just caused her to miss her husband and hit her lover. Too bad, so sad. The only thing that would have made it better was for the shotgun to fly up and hit her between the eyes and put her in a vegetative state. Now that would have made the story a 5 for sure.

I don't get why the husband is glad Jack is dead.

The husband hated the wife for over three years and the evidenced adultery gave him grounds for divorce with an advantage in any property division, and no alimony. Jack did him a favor. The past descriptions of Jack's behavior showed him a friend and Jack was getting the hubby out of a bad marriage. Bad form to have Jack fall for the harpy and bad form for the husband to want Jack dead.

Dear Rocketman - read the story again

Jack was fucking Bob's wife BEHIND his back. Jack didn't supply the pictures -Bob did! But in one fell swoop Bob gets rid of his cheating wife and his backstabbing ex-best friend. GENIUS!

The slut deserves to be punished

Hopefully the cheating slut in this story will get the death penalty. I can't help but wonder how many cheating sluts get set up for murdering their lover(s)? It seems to me to be something that would be damn near the perfect revenge. Of course it would involve a lot of planning but what the hell, it would be worthwhile just to see the cheating bitch suffer while knowing all the time she is innocent.

Wow, I just had to come back and read this again.

I am such a sucker for happy endings. You know?

what a lucky bastard.

he can even send his ex postcards from vagas with him and a couple of strippers.

IT IS GOOD WHEN THE TABLES ARE ON YOUR SIDE 100%

now to make that happen is not to get caught. TK U MLJ LV NV

Grim just plain grim.

Love flash stories

and this is a good one. Late in, early out, 1 scene and 3 protagonists.
Well done, even if the story line is a little thin.
5*


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