"It just happened" "You were so busy and I was neglected" "They convinced me you were cheating" "The cheating was exciting and I was addicted".
She HAD to know from when they were first dating, when he cooled things off when he just THOUGHT she was fucking others, that he's not going to forgive all out cheating!
That expression may have made sense at some point in time. But anymore aren't we all "used goods" by the time we marry?
Infidelity is the problem, not that someone is "used". Words express ideas, and they do matter.
It would take an author with Ohio's caliber of talent to write a viable reconciliation from this story's dismal, closing contrempts
Viable for me that is . Sandi had the intensity to kill a man for thwarting her love and marriage with narrator, so requisite passion was there. The feeling was channeled badly ala ' Separate Vacations '. That's what prompts me to have wistful feeling and sense of unfinished business for the conclusion.
Excellent writing by JPB because I know the husband can't be faulted for his choice and yet I sigh a little. It's the cognitive dissonance only top authors induce.
its a choice and puts one into a situation, TK U MLJ LV NV
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Anonymous01/26/17
YEAH BUDDY!!!!
Man I hate a cheating skank, especially one who takes you for granted while you slave away to take care of her. To be that selfish is simply inexcusable which makes it so pleasant to see the way this one went down. (No pun intended) Our hero maintains his integrity and the whore shows just what she truly is. She just couldn't stop fucking around even after she gets proof that the husband is faithful. I just love the total symmetry of this story. Everyone got just what they deserved. Almost the perfect BTB.
To think the bitch sat there full of some other guys baby, not even being able to lie and say it was the husbands and still thinks there might be a chance for their marriage? Obviously this is fantasy.
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Cliches!
Wow, could we fit in any more LW cliches?
"It just happened" "You were so busy and I was neglected" "They convinced me you were cheating" "The cheating was exciting and I was addicted".
She HAD to know from when they were first dating, when he cooled things off when he just THOUGHT she was fucking others, that he's not going to forgive all out cheating!
Used goods?
That expression may have made sense at some point in time. But anymore aren't we all "used goods" by the time we marry?
Infidelity is the problem, not that someone is "used". Words express ideas, and they do matter.
It would take an author with Ohio's caliber of talent to write a viable reconciliation from this story's dismal, closing contrempts
Viable for me that is . Sandi had the intensity to kill a man for thwarting her love and marriage with narrator, so requisite passion was there. The feeling was channeled badly ala ' Separate Vacations '. That's what prompts me to have wistful feeling and sense of unfinished business for the conclusion.
Excellent writing by JPB because I know the husband can't be faulted for his choice and yet I sigh a little. It's the cognitive dissonance only top authors induce.
Full marks * * * * *
#2 HOW YOU JUSTIFY A MISTAKE, WHEN ITS NOT
its a choice and puts one into a situation, TK U MLJ LV NV
YEAH BUDDY!!!!
Man I hate a cheating skank, especially one who takes you for granted while you slave away to take care of her. To be that selfish is simply inexcusable which makes it so pleasant to see the way this one went down. (No pun intended) Our hero maintains his integrity and the whore shows just what she truly is. She just couldn't stop fucking around even after she gets proof that the husband is faithful. I just love the total symmetry of this story. Everyone got just what they deserved. Almost the perfect BTB.
To think the bitch sat there full of some other guys baby, not even being able to lie and say it was the husbands and still thinks there might be a chance for their marriage? Obviously this is fantasy.
That's it
Cut and dried. Very dry.
Still got my 5.....bill
Oh, Hell. He should at least go see her a time or two.
Remember the good times, at least she handled the situation as well as she could.
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