All Comments on 'Jaylene Models The Second Time'

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BigJohn601BigJohn601about 13 years ago
Redheads always get my motor running!

Yummy!

RehnquistRehnquistabout 13 years ago
I'm In Love . . .

with Jaylene.

WOW!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nice, however

We are lucky to have such a nice model before us. She is beautiful and the costumes are interesting certainly...who wears lingerie any more? However, the model violates the no.1 rule of modeling: you never (ever) show what you do not have...ever.

She is pretty but she IS 'somewhat challenged' in the upper area. I have never known any woman who had less; I would not have made her reveal all as she did.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I love her upper area.........

........she has more than a handful, and that's what makes my heart palpitate........

x_JohnDoe_xx_JohnDoe_xabout 13 years ago
She is Gorgeous.

Whoever she is please pass on my compliments. The writing was good too:)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
great playful stories

good job of fitting the great photo shoots (your model is a sweetie) to the stories

katibkatibabout 13 years ago
Beautiful!

Well posed model. Not sure that the tattoo helps her -- but she is a real cutie. And the prose is not so bad, either.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Lovely model

I give her a 10, the story was good too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
so beautiful!!

yes your very sexy and pretty if i do say! only marr is those stupid tatoos...sorry but your too pretty for that crap!

dtimberdtimberabout 13 years ago
Great Pix!

Nice story.

Loved the tats!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nice Story!

Great Tits!

Scorpio44Scorpio44about 13 years ago
The combination is perfect!

Can I order one of those dresses? We're supposed to go to a big social gathering and I just found out my "date" gave me an STD!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Awsome

Lovely story - great photos especially the one with her shaved pussy. More please how about some sex in them?

Jim

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Very appropriate model

Model suits the person and clothes of the person she is conveying. Perfect English Rose look.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Write more stories!! ^_^

Your stories are great! too bad its been 4 months since you last updated. Hope you write new stories soon! ^__^

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

love the photography. hope to see more of your work

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Maximum Exposure

Lovely photos lovely girl,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Lovely pics and bits

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Pretty gal...pretty pics

Pretty gal....Lovely pics but less encouraging....inculcate some hardcore fucking & anal pics of pretty gals for making more steamy stories...this one good job

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

The photos are beautiful as is the model. Love the stockings and belt, very sexy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
100%

This is clever, and it even has me reflecting that the prev subs combine sexy capital S with smiles. And enough of a stoyline to signify healthy fantasy. Even a touch of comedy. No nasty. Make that 101%

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Lovely

Your model is gorgeous. I hope you do a next chapter with a bit of innocent sex. You're a wonderful photographer and I look forward to reading more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Absolutely beautiful

Not at all impressed by the tattoos but your smile, shape, beauty, and amazing breasts and nipples take my breathe away.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Luuuve the tease!It's all about anticipation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Cute

This is a cute story-light and fun.

boraddaboraddaalmost 11 years ago
Lovely Model

Legs upto her arse,cheeky at the top

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Beautiful

An extraordinarily pretty lady. Thank you for sharing these photos.

Morris

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Stunningly beautiful and a perfect model

She is a natural but always wonder why somebody who is so stunning why she would mar her body with those ugly tattoos. It is a shame but please use her again if you can write an entire story around her and others.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
re anon 08/30/2014: i fully agree with the comment. As regards anon 01/15/2015 i agree with the comments except for the tatoo opinion

*****

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I COULD FALL IN LOVE WITH THE MODEL

*****

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
your model is beautiful

is any of her other work available?

HardXsRHereHardXsRHereover 5 years ago
A better photographer than author.

can't get hard with these photo's

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Parallels My Fantasy

My cousin's fiance is a photographer by hobby. I have posed for him on numerous occasions. It seems like each photo he takes is slightly more revealing than the last. Recently I have found myself in down blouse or upskirt photos. And just yesterday, he took a picture of me topless. He asked if it made me uncomfortable. I told him it would have if the photographer had been anyone else but him. He hinted that there would most likely be more...maybe even many more...topless photos of me in my future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A star is re-presented to us

And the pics do her - and the story - justice. Congrats to both.

earlcarterearlcarteralmost 3 years ago

great story and pics are perfect enjoy all your stories u have posted

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great story also great pictures would love to see a little hair on that pussy.

Anonymous
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