Bound to My Mate Ch. 18

can't put it down

I've never read an erotic story that kept me so captivated... You develop each character like some of the best novels out there. You should write a book! I stay up late reading this because its so good! The visuals you give are so descriptive and well written. Thank you so much!

wonderful story!!!

This is by far the best story I've read in this site. I hope you write more stories like this.

I hope you write more stories like this one . You are very good at it .

I am having a wonderful time .


Stephen J

Was Davonna 170+ years old?? How could she know Linda and her intent and steal her body for the source? What was the refrigeration 150 years ago to keep the "source" viable? I would think there would be some other story to her obtaining the body. If you publish this, you might consider addressing this differently. Other than this, I like the story immensely!!

Ch. 4
"You asked about Linda, she was Lucas's mate, ...She used magic to poison the pack leaders above her, her and a group of others that felt the same way. The poison didn't work right and they were caught."
"Lucas was not so lucky and has lived the last hundred and fifty years as an outcast."

Ch. 18
"Linda wanted power in the pack and was going to use source magic to accomplish it. The witches wanted the money such powerful spells would bring. It seems it was a mutually beneficial arrangement for them. Linda's death stalled Davonna. She had to learn to use the source's decaying body and it took time," Joel surmised."