Since she is now his totally submissive, he should show her more than just love, but to worship her body mind and soul, since the submissive partner is the one who is really in charge of what is happening in the relationship.
The young stud just doesn't realize that yet.
Thanks for the good read
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Anonymous12/31/10
No Wonder You Are Single (Bio)
You aren't intelligent enough to know that finger in asshole, then same finger in pussy equals vaginal infection, which in turn shuts down possibilities of fucking or "loving" intercourse. Dumb author equals dumb writing!
This could have been a better story if you had just left it alone after you fucked up the first chapter. You must be all of 15 years old or a stupid jackass that is all alone without a woman. You could have trained her but not have been such an ass about it.
I admit that it's a very simplistic plot, and the action is a tad under stated, but give him a go. It can only get better.
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Anonymous01/01/11
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Another lazy author who uses the apostrophe for quotation marks. It's pure laziness.
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Anonymous01/02/11
speed read
If you intend on writing, you really need to learn punctuation. Sentences that are a paragraph long just lets everyone know you probably didn't finish high school. The story line was interesting but in the sense of it being a son taking ownership of his mother.... well, the Dominance factor was there sometimes and then gone again. A Dominant would not give His rules for His new woman and then finish the statement with "okay?" But keep trying.
English
A little short but good
Did she become pregnant?
Since she is now his totally submissive, he should show her more than just love, but to worship her body mind and soul, since the submissive partner is the one who is really in charge of what is happening in the relationship.
The young stud just doesn't realize that yet.
Thanks for the good read
No Wonder You Are Single (Bio)
You aren't intelligent enough to know that finger in asshole, then same finger in pussy equals vaginal infection, which in turn shuts down possibilities of fucking or "loving" intercourse. Dumb author equals dumb writing!
To bad you wasted my time
This could have been a better story if you had just left it alone after you fucked up the first chapter. You must be all of 15 years old or a stupid jackass that is all alone without a woman. You could have trained her but not have been such an ass about it.
A little harsh there people
I admit that it's a very simplistic plot, and the action is a tad under stated, but give him a go. It can only get better.
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Another lazy author who uses the apostrophe for quotation marks. It's pure laziness.
speed read
If you intend on writing, you really need to learn punctuation. Sentences that are a paragraph long just lets everyone know you probably didn't finish high school. The story line was interesting but in the sense of it being a son taking ownership of his mother.... well, the Dominance factor was there sometimes and then gone again. A Dominant would not give His rules for His new woman and then finish the statement with "okay?" But keep trying.
I liked it!
I liked it.. I hope that you carry on writing!
good
i liked it , hot sex for a submissive mom
no
have the woman no tits!
Best story ever
I love this story! The ravishment is brutal, graphic but not vulgar, which is hard to do. Excellent writing.
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