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How fuckin hot!!! I want my first time to be like that...
Distracting
Never had I read a story where the character's name came up seven times in a paragraph. Sure, the two main characters were both male, but there's still a way to write the tale without using their names that much.
Seriously, the writing itself distracted from any quality the sex scene could have had.
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