All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 46'

You are quite good at maintaining the personality of each character in the conversations and thought expressions. I am really loving this story.

and fine characterization. Pure Enjoyment!

I haven't commented in a while, but wait for each chapter eagerly. I love the dialog and the thought processes contained in the narrative, which gives the story a two layered feel, sort of a behind the scenes view of events. I realize most of this is told from Ashley's point of view, but getting some of Jeff's thoughts would be interesting also.

I am not a big literary critic, but I must say that I am really enjoying this series. I have found so little to enjoy on Lit. lately and your series has become very special as well as a benchmark for others to measure their work by.

Thanks again,

Gary

write more of the story! Soon!

please please more!!!!

<p>Literotica changed the submission process and I had trouble getting them submitted. They changed it back and I just finished submitting them with minor corrections. Both chapters are on my site, as well as 49 and 50.</p>

<p>I'm back writing. I'll probably finish 60 Monday and hope to fly after that when some time opens up.</p>

Ah, I loved this installment. I am trying to pace myself in reading the rest of the story, as I don't want it to end. :)

When it comes down to it, I love these two, they make a cute couple.