Seducing Mom

love it, love it

Great start

Oh you just have to do follow up to this!!!

Good, hot, but the end seemed rushed. You are a good writer, and I'm looking forward to your future submissions. Draw out the actual coupling, and describe it in more detail.

Good luck ;)

A good scheme

Now he has to find a way to get his mother to fuck him while she is sober.

That will be the test he needs to have her all of the time.

Thanks

I nearly didn't...

... bother to read this story since the idea of a son using a photo shoot to seduce his mother seemed so hackneyed, but you give this a really fresh and exciting twist.. well done

well pertty good

you got very quick after spending so much time leading up to the deed

Good Story But...

I agree with some of the other comments.

The story started off great untll you got in the sex and the ending much too quickly.

I would love to see a re-write where you extended the final seduction.

should rewrite

yes i agreed with one of the comments...ur story is leading up so far so good, until the rush with sex...spend some more time perfecting this story...
thank you for the story, its a good read.

Keep Going

Somebody watching recorginized his mom, and now he wants to fuck his mom or he will tell the father.

Please continue

Nice twist would be if his father was one of the people on the forum telling him how to seduce his wife. This was his special birthday gift. Maybe his mother was even in on the plan.

fuck grart

... bother to read this story since the idea of a son using a photo shoot to seduce his mother seemed so hackneyed, but you give this a really fresh and exciting twist.. well done

Love It

Very horny story. I loved it.

Wow

Wow, that was one of the best incest stories I have read

this is a great, really clever story of hot motherfucking...

by an accomplished writer. The hero, Robert, sure is a persistent and resourceful lad. As his mother exposes more and more of her voluptuous body to his photographic efforts, her boy gets more and more excited. His stiff young prick makes a big tent under his fly, and he nearly jizzes in his pants. Luckily, Robert controls his dick, he has a much better idea of where he's gonna jizz. Mom notices what's happening in her boy's pants (mothers tend to notice interesting things like that), and her motherly mommy-hole gets real wet. Nature is preparing that wonderful hole between her legs for invasion by a person of the cock-toting persuasion. That it's her darling baby boy's hard on in front of her face that's gonna make its triumphal entry makes her even wetter. All of this is being transmitted to a bunch of excited wannabe young motherfuckers, who relay their dirty-minded comments. They're waiting breathlessly for the moment when "he shoots! he scores!" And that's exactly what Robert does, as he shoves his big stiff prick up his own mother's cunt and unloads his young balls up the same twat he came out of. Everybody's happy, including his mom, who has the best cum of her life from the great incestuous fuck, his audience, who enjoy the vicarious fucking of their own moms, and most of all, Robert--the proud, grinning young motherfucker, who's blown his balls up the best cunt in the whole fucking world, his own beloved mother's beautiful, incomparable cunt.

This one is better then most !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You did a good job with this one, Dads out of town, Moms drunk and willing to pose. And you just happen to have two cameras.It all made for a good read.. ....LAROC

Where's the respect?

You posted pictures of your mom without even considering her feelings or what impact exposure of that sort could do to her life.
If i was your mom that would have been your LAST fuck.

live feed to total strangers?

That is just messed up!
Without that it would have been a good story.

fuck her again and again.

Streaming a live feed of you fucking your mom isn't asking for trouble now is it? Yeah, right!!!

I enjoyed it but...

This was good escapism, like the stripper mom one, but that other one felt realer. Not a problem, just an observation.

Every Man's Wet Dream

Wonderful story. Would like to read follow up stories. Would like to see a growing relationship between mother and son without alcohol being involved. But top marks in all areas for this one.

Different... But.

If my son was to ever post pictures of.me on the net like that, he'd be on the missing persons list

. Boring

Totally sick. No imagination, not story line, not worth re-reading. Most are.