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Great beginning....LOL...although the wife thing made me laughed. :) Hope you continue writing and want longer chapters. Thanks!
Great to have you back
I discovered this site a little over a year and a half ago - and your stories were some of the works to draw me in. I can't tell you how exciting it was to see your name in the New section!
Great start to this submission, can't wait to see how it develops.
And would it be too much to hope this is the first of loads more to come?
Here's to you never disappearing again,
:)
AH
More Please
Great first chapter, can't wait for the next one! I really appreciate a well written story and now I'm going to go read the rest of your stories :-)
You're back!!!
I think AzanianHeat already said what I want to say. I can't agree with her more^^
Definately glad your back! I'm excited to see where this story is headed that opening left demonstrates how much potential this story has! I believe like all your stories its going to be so full of twists it will be tantilising! Can't wait for the next chapter! Cheers :D
YAY!!!!!!1!
Its great to see more stories from u. You r one of the best writer here.
Cant wait to read the rest. please post soon.
Great start to the story!!! Cant wait to see who the hunk is. Keep it coming!
Awsome
Great story so far i cnt wait 2 read more
A bit too short when you compare it with your past work but still very well written.
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