All Comments on 'Connie's Summer Stallion Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Lets see the young stud do his mom in part 2

Great story, keep it going. But have his mom resist at first and then cave in and become his toy

HungExecutiveHungExecutiveover 13 years agoAuthor
Oh My...

Do you really think that the conservative, loving mother, the prim and proper Lynn would really sink to such a level as to give in to her sinful carnal cravings? Hmmmmm....

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
So hot!

But please, please don't have the mother give in and have sex with him. It's too unrealistic and at the moment this is a brilliant story of out of the ordinary hot sex. Please don't add incest into it. It definitely doesn't need anymore than it has. It's fucking awesome the way it is. Much better to leave the mother repressed and show the son's fun with Connie!

Spider1Spider1over 13 years ago
Great pacing and detail

You are the master of the slow build, my friend. Kudos to a great story. Looking forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Perfect

That was some hot shit!!!! Cant wait for part 2..

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Boring

And Repetitive,

HungExecutiveHungExecutiveover 13 years agoAuthor
To "BORING"

As always I appreciate all types of feedback. Your's is certainly no different. While everyone seeks the approval of others, it is the critical comments that help us to learn. So in an effort to improve my writing, perhaps you could provide me with a link to your work so that I can continue to learn and better my craft from your experience and guidance.

Thanks in advance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
very hot

very hot story , I especially like the detailed descriptions of the scenes and bodies ; hopefully the will be a second part to this and make sur to include some facial cumshots (like in part 1)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
loved it

now i've cum all over myself,thanks

hotracer69hotracer69about 13 years ago
More Please

Please continue with this story as it has got the scope to be devloped into more. Your writing is very good I can't wait for part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Instantly one of my favorites.

I don't usually even like incest, which I can see is probably what the next installment will be, but I don't care as long as I get to read more of this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

can't wait for part 2 to arrive; I really like your style, so hopefully you come up with part 2 (or a new story) soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
More!

Come on, man--don't leave us hanging!

LelouchLelouchalmost 12 years ago

Looking forward to part 2, when the sated Chris comes home to find his mother waiting impatiently for him... in an alluring negligee! Eventually, of course, Connie and Lynn will just have to learn to share!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Word Meaning

"She had to touch and taste his virulent cock." Did Chris have a highly contagious STD?

I think you might have meant "Virile"

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
CANT WAIT FOR PART 2

I WANT PART 2, PLEASEEEEEEEE

But pleaseeee, NO INCEST.

I want it only hunky chris and bitch connie. i want conie more naughty and bitchy in prt 2 and chris more hunky

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great

Wow, that was one of the hottest stories I've ever read. Well done. Bring on Part 2.

movies_maidens_n_manmeatmovies_maidens_n_manmeatabout 11 years ago
Need some ass-fucking and an ATM finish

Such an overheated MILF should inspire a young stud to a hot anal fucking with an ATM finish

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
yesss

Oh fuck yes that was amazing I'm too fucking horny right now. I want a huge cock in me lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
more

more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wowzers!!

That was fucking awesome! Best story ever!

dstar76dstar76over 4 years ago
So hot...

Would like to read of their adventures

dottie86dottie86about 4 years ago
Well done!

I hope you're going to give us more on these two AND his mom!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Good story. Hooe there will be a chapter 2 soon. Maybe Chris gets his mom and Connie pregnant or makes Connie his own personal slut. I am sure Connie would love to his slut if it meant she gets him inside her again

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