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Always proof read it first
Nice quick little tale but don't depend on spell check to find most of the errors. Did you really mean to write "I remained on top of me..." That is something I just HAVE GOT TO SEE! Just a small help that should help increase your stories ratings.
Algononon...
I am your smallest fan. I read you with interest. In my dreams, I imagine you, and king Arthur over the round table. I never check my "copy" for grammar or spelling. Do you never do the crossword? me neither..nor.
Don't be a twit, I won't be a twat.
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