A Girl in Need Ch. 01

Deliberately Short

To anonymous who sent me a comment direct. This was deliberately short as I wanted to get some input from others. Regardless of this being Literotica. this subject is one of the most distressing that can be presented to an investigator and I must admit that it will be tough to finish the story. Murder would be much easier lol

Not what I expected

But that is not necessarily a bad thing. I know there is an incest section here, but that is consenting adults, not child abuse. I think you have the beginning of an interesting story. I'll be looking for its continuation. Personally, I don't have a problem with the shorter length. It seems like a serial story in one of the old pulp magazines from years ago. Keep up the good writing.

Great start

Will look for the next part

Fine Start

I certainly hope that you will be able to finish this. Since it is apparently based on a real-life experience it may be tough sledding emotionally. I admit that after reading this first page I was ready to take the book to the cashier. You are a fine new talent here and we hope to see much more of you.

Good start

Looking forward to your next installment. Thanks!

very good story am looking forward to the next part