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What I Want

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone01/01/11

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looks like you are advertising
Look up Rule of three: Rule of Seven

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by vrosej1001/02/11

Well written

But too long for my tastes. I feel like it could have been said better in half the length.

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by Esperanza_Hidalgo01/24/11

I like

this poem, but do think it may be a bit long. The personal experience is something I enjoy reading.

EH

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