All Comments on 'The Wild One - Audio'

the Keebler elves brought cookies?

pleasure erupts from all parts of my soul

I always feel that way

I feel the thickness of him,

his cookies?

Sorry, cliched, this really isn't poetry.

I gave you a 75, the thought of the cookies intrigued me

Love the poem and your reading of it is exquisite. It's easy to hear the longing and desire in your voice as you wrap it around the words. I'd encourage you to do more poetry AND share your readings with us.