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by vrosej1001/02/11

Fair whack at a tanka.

Was that the intention? Has five lines and a pivot line; looks like tanka to me. I'm a fan of Japanese poetry, so you're getting a recommendation.

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by twelveoone01/02/11

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good seeing you back,
I would like to see a Dorthy Parker Tanka
if you handle requests

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