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The Dare Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/04/11

Great adventure

Please continue

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by gasmuse7701/04/11

Second that

Please continue...

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by Anonymous01/04/11

1 star.

yes continue. BUT put this shit in the FETISH or GROUP sex category. That is where ALL Swinging/Cucking stories belong. You will also get a better rating.

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by Sidney4301/04/11

Not bad so far

Needed some proof reading, but not bad so far. Please continue with another chapter and the category is fine.

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by steve776601/04/11

please continue

loved it more please

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by Anonymous01/04/11

I am liking it so far

Keep it up, continue please. Oh, and no, I think this story belong in loving wife, not fetish.

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by hardforit01/04/11

More

Definitely keep it going!

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by Anonymous01/04/11

More exhibition

It certainly grabbed me and, wouldn't you know, gave me a good start on a woody!

Please continue this story.

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by Anonymous01/05/11

Want more of this!

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by theaquarianpen01/05/11

PLEASE

CHAPTER2 IS NEEDED

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by nanuk6101/05/11

please continue.....

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by Anonymous01/06/11

Ended before the finish

Good story but she needs the cock in her

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by Anonymous04/30/11

cmon

You can't start up a good story and just LEAVE it like that. NEXT CHAPTER!!

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by Anonymous07/23/11

This is a HOT story, PLEASE continue

OMG, how disappointing to get to the end and have no second chapter. This is like Dallas leaving us hanging with "Who Shot JR". OK, many won't get that, but I am a 54 year old woman and found Literotica when my husband left it open one day. He doesn't know it, but since I found Literotica I can't keep my fingers out of my panties, I probably masturbate more than him now. Literotica has also made me more adverturous in bed.

This stroy, to be blunt, made my cunt wet. I seldom use the C word, except when I am REALLY horny and this story did it for me. It makes me want to go dancing, and for you younger readers, please don't be disgusted that a woman or my age still likes to fuck, now THAT word I love. I still have a pussy and have swallowed more of my husband's cum that most of you and my body, yes with a boob lift, is a tight as when I was 35.

Please write more. I am planning to leave this open for my husband to find. Maybe we WILL go dancing, with your help.

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by knotz2u03/04/14

Hot story

Hopefully you follow up. What happens at the house & what will be her follow-up dare for him? You have a gift for writing, easy to read & erotic. Thanks for your effort....Pat (knotz2u@yahoo.com)
BTW I voted 5 stars

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by Anonymous11/27/16

Great build-up, hot story telling, but...

... you really can't spell. Their... Rigid...

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by Mnghm1702/28/17

Building up some erotic tension

Go for the second part. You have a plot and a sequence, and will be interesting to see where this goes

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by Anonymous05/16/17

finish it

WOW nice story but, you need to finish it

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