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Rae Goes For The Money Ch. 01

byJust Plain Bob©
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by Anonymous

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by RePhil01/04/11

Bob when did you castrate your male characters?

Gave you five stars based on your library of stories. This one however isn't close given that I am definatlely not a fan main male charactors being castrated wimp ass cuckolds. I guess maybe you have to experience it first hand to appreciate pumping into a well greased cum filled pussy rank with STDs and HIV. just not my thing. But your still one of the better writers on the entire site

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by jrigganduke01/04/11

tease?

Are you going to write more on this one or just leave it unfinished as usual?

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by Mandy0101/04/11

RePhil's right

Although I'm not male and really shouldn't get annoyed with this sort of story, it abrades me when I feel someone is being lied to and disrespected. When someone writes their characters this way I get antsy and feel like yelling at them to grow a set and stop thinking with their tiny minds.

There is no doubt that JPB is a good author, love him or hate him, there is no debate with his writing skills! The trouble I have is in his choice of male characters, as though Bob is living a nefarious life by proxy. Not stupid, mind you, it does get away from the problems his characters have to deal with and they are mainly medical as RePhil suggested.

I like humiliation, but it has to be self inducted, and definitely consensual. Being a gay female, I don’t have the problem most men have of having the male character sucking down gallons of leftovers from his wife’s dalliances. I do have a problem with deceit and disrespect.

When Bob choose to have the wife lie to her husband about her nightly activity was when he lost me. I could have been brought back if the husband had been told after the first night what she was doing and why, and him suddenly finding some sexual gratification through a long standing hidden battle with humiliation, now stemming from her wicked ways.

Anyway, JAJPBS(Just Another JPB Story) sighs

Amanda

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by theaquarianpen01/05/11

AS ALWAYS BIG BOB

NOT YOUR BEST BUT STILL VERY GOOD

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by digdaddyrich02/14/11

This guy is certainly forgiving

Perhaps he is just a bit on the wimpy side and has no real backbone to sand up to to a whore of a wife.

No sympathy given to this cuckold.

Somewhere in this story there needs to be a character that the reader can feel something for. So far Jimmy is the only one that is getting the shaft.

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by DWornock07/02/11

I gave this Ch 5*****s

But that is no guarantee that Ch. 02 will get 5*****s.

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by chytown05/22/12

Crazy Bob!!!

Keep them coming Bob. Thanks for the read.

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by tazz31705/22/12

HOW FAR AND HOW LOW CAN YOU GO

already a cucky wimp. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by catphan812/28/12

another fucking cucky wimp! Disgusting!!!

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by EgoTrixi08/26/14

Questions...right...

...i.e. how to spend the extra money or what does being a pimp with a household-whore improve in live. More relevant: Could she earn enough money for him to buy himself a pair of balls?

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by Anonymous12/14/14

I can't see any real questions

She has become a prostitute. I don't think he's her pimp. So unless sloppy seconds and any number of diseases interest him, the only answer is a divorce. But with JPB writing the story you never know what will happen or NOT happen. We'll see.

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