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good until the end
was anticlimactic...nothing in the ending...just a big "the end" basically.
I enjoyed it up until that single point though.
just my 2 cents really.
Missed a good opportunity for some good visual sex.
I would like to have read what he did to his mother.All of the erotic details.
Shame that it wasn't written.
This was like an un-satisfying quickie ...
It was a little bit weird. but kinda good.
This made no sense
I really didn't get this story at all.
It made no sense the whole way through, maybe if you rewrote it and added some more sexual content and a better story line it would get 5 stars instead of 1
Neat trick
ending, and only sort of vaguely telegraphed by the way Joanne responded to his request that she accompany him.
Solidly written and quite descriptive.
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