Why He Fucked His Momma

good until the end

was anticlimactic...nothing in the ending...just a big "the end" basically.

I enjoyed it up until that single point though.

just my 2 cents really.

Missed a good opportunity for some good visual sex.

I would like to have read what he did to his mother.All of the erotic details.

Shame that it wasn't written.

This was like an un-satisfying quickie ...

It was a little bit weird. but kinda good.

This made no sense

I really didn't get this story at all.
It made no sense the whole way through, maybe if you rewrote it and added some more sexual content and a better story line it would get 5 stars instead of 1

Neat trick

ending, and only sort of vaguely telegraphed by the way Joanne responded to his request that she accompany him.

Solidly written and quite descriptive.