The Lawyer and the Killer Ch. 12

WOW!!!!

This story was so great...Other then the rape.....Shawn was such a sweet guy....Please keep up the GREAT (You passed good after the 1st chapter) work....I hope to see more work from you soon.

It's fantastic how the author made the characters seem so real

A great story and I enjoyed each and every chapter. It's been a while since I read chapter one, but if my memory serves me correctly, there wasn't anything wrong with it.

Thanks for the great work.

Thanks

Nice story. At least it has an ending. To tell the truth I could not stop reading. Nice going.

Really liked it.

I couldn't stop reading it.

omg the story was amazing the perfect love story u should write some more it was really good

well done

One of the best reads i have ever seen on this site,good enough to be a novel.I would certainly buy it and any sequel printed,,thanks for some great entertaining reading.

Good potential, but ...

... too much unrealism to swallow. Editing left only very few errors, but some stilted phraseology. But -- Shawn's metamorphosis from the merciless killer described in chapter 1 to the neat modest, shy hero was a bit too much and distracted me from the story. When the heroine got back to work after the second kidnapping, surely nobody would buy the fact that she didn't go directly to the police. Otherwise, good character development and story. Just try to make people and situations more realistic next time.

JMF

Thanks anon JMF

You're right this story was a little bit 'out there'.