patrons all

Good use of images

but i did like the other one better...great poem though.

Poet Guy generally concurs with Vee's comment.

Not being English (or, for that matter, Greek, Serbian, Georgian, etc. as Wikipedia informs him), he does not understand the context. Apparently St. George's Day is a major shopping day?

Perhaps this disconnect has affected his appreciation of the poem. Good job, though, in any case.

I do get the images

but beg you cut a few words: Line 3 (or is that just a mistake?), line 5 and "electronic". It's a fine poem nonetheless. x

I had to google St. George's Day and everything fell nicely in place; not sure, however, about L12.

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rotters all, actually I suspect an anti welsh bias about some twit in tin slaying dragons becoming the patron saint of england. but on the lighter side in the us we have white sales on MLK day, which always cracks me up, but nobody else.
So about what time did he become patron saint of jolly ole, ' bout th' time of eddy long of shanks?
So this Englishman and a Scot are sitting in a pub on St George's Day when a Welshman and a Dragon walk in.....