by MsEroticLover
Add some more detail next time and it will be even better. But very nice first try!
The story had a realistic feel about it that made it extremely hot. Hope we hear more about this couple. But keep it real. Don't have them move too fast.
This has been a fantasy of mine for a long time. Thanks for writing it down!
Great short (and sweet) story. Loved the fact she (you) grabbed her husband for the hook-up and reveled in her decision to do so.
Nicely handled -- and the restraint is laudable. Too many stories like this end up with everyone screwing each other.
Finally a new writer this year that has avoided the wimpy humiliating cuckold theme so popular with the new writers. Keep on writing in this manner and you'll become a hit with many readers. Thanks for the entertainment and your efforts to provide us with decent erotic reading material. ML
What was the point of your story ? Just two couples getting naked and not swapping what's the point?