All Comments on 'Merry Christmas'

Please fix this so one character doesn't change name in mid-story!

why the radical name change jessica to alliyah halfway through the story?

great story. i noticed you havent written many but i read the other as well and loved it. might need a little work but i definately will watch for more of your posts!

v e r y sexy, wish it was longer and more detailed! hope to see more of this couple!

I think this is my 4th time I read this. Love it every time.

this is really amazing and hot!!! plz write more on these 2

Definitely one of the hottest I've read. I hope u continue this...

there should be a second part to this.... THUMPS UP..........

Is part 2 on the way

Like this story a lot

Make a part 2

i need their romance story. then i need their were having our baby story. so far this current story would be the middle part. so we are missing the begining and the final parts. :)

That was one of the best you should make a part 2

You might want to educate yourself before you write about it.

Discreetlover I hope you will write more about these two lovers and whether they have children and how many brilliant story too short for me waiting for more thank you.xxx