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buttersbuttersover 13 years ago
works for me

how you manage to take us out of the toilets and into his head, just as the N is in his head - distancing himself with the distraction of thought. like the ambiguities that can be inferred from the final lines.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 13 years ago
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Excellent

"a child is father to man."

even this is well done,

Excellent double use at the ending

PoetGuyPoetGuyover 13 years ago
Poet Guy has a bit of a mixed reaction to this one.

The ending is kind of funny, but that seems a little bit of a let-down. Perhaps Poet Guy was thinking this was a different kind of poem that what the author intended it to be; perhaps Poet Guy is merely a clueless dolt. In any case, this poem made him think, as yours always do, and he appreciates that.

Senna JawaSenna Jawaover 13 years ago
a positive exception

An ironic (auto-ironic? :-) juxtaposition.

A great majority of poems which mention poems, words, writing, a poet, ... are lousy, extra spoiled by this very theme, while this poem is very good.

This poem reminds me of a different (not ironic) one--"your lips" (posted also on Literotica, but Literotica programmers have messed up its format, which was different, just normal, originally).

Corpse_riderCorpse_rideralmost 13 years ago
Read these Words

Hits the superlative nail on the head.

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