A Simple Night Alone

Grammar in 'tease'

"The story took place as it was wrote, so it's nothing big." The poor grammar in the tease makes me not likely to read the story. It should be, "as it was WRITTEN"

Ignore the troll. I loved it!

I don't mind the comment correcting me, but giving me a 1 star rating when you clearly stated that you *probably* didn't read it? Thanks.

I'm not a writer and never want to be one. This was just for fun. It was also my first upload. If people are going to make a big deal out of a tiny grammar error then I won't ever share anything. There was also an error at the end where I said enjoyed rather than enjoying. I don't know how to go back and edit it.

Obviously the editor was okay with it since it got uploaded.

Charming interlude

Sweet, personal, and to the point. I'll look forward to more!

(And, as someone else said, ignore the troll.)

Incredibly Erotic and Beautiful...

This was a very hot story...don't even need video...talented writer!

Very good.

Enjoyed ... very good little story.

That was great! Rather arousing to say the least.
Basic and right to the point. (A good thing!)

Hope to see more by you.

very hot ;)