All Comments on 'Bathrobe Mornings Ch. 03'

by twistedjoe37

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Very hot..

Please continue with this story...

suzi-gsuzi-gabout 13 years ago
That was sooo HOT

Can't wait for more, keep it up ;-O

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

I like this story a nice lead up to both sisters getting involved - then the story seemed to be tied up as if it was finished for good.

Why do this? the bum fun was added as a throwaway line without any of all the glorious details that could have been shared.

Is this the end of the story or will you carry on describing more kinky stuff?

I rubbed a nice one out to this at the end and as much as Im unashamed to say that the addition of anal at some point would have caused me to shoot a foot further - then then im a perv.

Great story tho - I always like the suprise element when added and the gradual dawning of the erotic exploites to come - these story could go on for a lot longer without some of the failing of others that needlessy go on about nothing - this had build up and result...thanks...please more

MizTMizTabout 13 years ago
HOT

That's all I have to say, this story has been HOT, it will be interesting to see if it continues.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Steller

Most excellent, it was believable, I think that's what made it so enjoyable to read. Please continue.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSabout 13 years ago
Great

I love it right to the end but my lord even in a story bringing childern into this kind of relationship is just too wrong.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
so hot

I love how Heather begs him not to come in her and then takes it anyway. it would be totally hot if he got both his daughters pregnant. or maybe it is just the fact that i am pregnant that makes me think so... write more stories twistedjoe!

den_tigerden_tigeralmost 13 years ago
Hot!

I really like this chapter. Hot!

sirhugssirhugsalmost 13 years ago
such a great series

I had to re read it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Favorite

I think this is my favorite story on Literotica. I come every time I read it, sometimes my bf even lies next to me and plays with my pussy while I read. I really like how sexy the dialogue is and the way your characters persuade and seduce each other to go further. I hope you'll keep writing more stories.

ellen_swallowsellen_swallowsover 12 years ago
Perfect!

Admirable skill to make one come with words! .

CassieKCassieKover 12 years ago
Control urself Cassie!!!!!!

Hey Joe sweetie I dont think ur twisted, I think u r delightful.

Just keep ur girls and me cumming.

Morlan502Morlan502over 12 years ago
Super erotic:

I bookmarked this story, all three chapters of course, so that I can easily come back to it. For my psyche, it was very erotic, and sufficiently exciting I could hear my heartbeat in my ears! The only thing that can make it better is if they both have babies for their father. Completely enjoyed this little story of erotic forbidden love! And for all you folks that making comments about how wrong all this is, your on an erotic literature web site, reading it along with the rest of us. Relax and enjoy the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
brings back memories

I'm 59 now but this brings back such erotic memories of the first time my daughter and i made love after working out and oral sex in our little sauna. Will look for more of you work here. Yours may be erotic fiction but my memories are still sharp and echo your style

pusylvr69pusylvr69over 12 years ago
I AM SOAKED!

Not sure what it is about your stories. I am usually attracted to the 5-10 page stories with all kinds of detail and lots of chapters. You make me just as hot with these short stories as some of those longer ones. Please keep this up and submit more stories. Can't wait to read your next submission!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

oh. my. god. !

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
more

We need more I enjoyed it!*!!*!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
SISTERS & DADDY

WELL THIS ONE OF THE BEST I'VE SEEN THIS WEEK NOT TO LONG AND VARY COMPACT AND TO THE POINT"SEX" BUT GREAT READING KEEP IT UP,BUT YOU GOT TO READ ALL 3 CHAPTERS YOU DON'T WANT TO MISS ANYTHING,I HAD TO REREAD SOME PARTS TO MAKE SURE,I HAD HUGE HARD-ON I DIDN'T THINK I HAD ENOUGH SKIN LEFT TO CLOSE MY EYES..GREAT STORY!!!!!!! I HAVE TO

AGREE WITH PUSYLUR 69.........AWESOME........................"R".............................

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hot Story Well Written

I hope that both Heather and honey give birth to daughters.

BigPopsBigPopsabout 12 years ago
I have just found this author, but am enjoying reading all his submissions

He definitely can write with a wonderful erotic touch and the subject matter has all of us hard in seconds - and now the three of them together - what a lucky dad

Thanks TJ

rock6752rock6752about 12 years ago
A 5 for the series

Interesting long term possibilities if one or both become mothers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
An honest 4/5 stars for the series of three.

I'm not one who hands out a 5 just because I kind of liked a story so a 4 is hard-won. Most of what brought the fourth star was for being up front about the whole possibility of pregnancy.

So many writers go on endlessly writing about the gallons of sperm-laden semen pumped into unprotected women and never even acknowledge the possible results. That's just so weird. I'm glad your lovers talked about it in a suitable way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Wow

I loved this story, i actually went through all 3 chapters before actually finishing with myself if you know what i mean, the very last line blew my mind! loved the whole story very well written

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
In Agreement

There is no argument from me to any of the other comments I loved this story and the ending was just right. Being a older man with a girlfriend younger than me by thirty years who calls me daddy when I go down on her got me into this genre of reading and I have never regretted it. Look forward to reading more of your stories.

thanks again

redskinsfan6969redskinsfan6969almost 12 years ago
very nice story

i wold love to read another chapter of this story

redfoxx15redfoxx15over 11 years ago
My dad and I loved it

I just wish I had a little sister like Heather to share my daddy with! Really hot story, but I'm not sure I'd dare risk getting pregnant. But it sure makes me want to!

peebudypeebudyover 11 years ago
great series

so delightfully wrong and kinky

suckmycockmeatsuckmycockmeatover 11 years ago
GREAT Fuck Daughters !

LOVED the whole story but especially chapter three when daddy was finally sucked and got to fuck his youngest daughter and the older one ate her freshly fucked, cum filed pussy ! - - - Reminds me in some ways of my wife and her younger sister !

Steve

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Wolvie7727Wolvie7727over 11 years ago
Holy hell that was hot.

I just finished reading your last part,and holy crap, I never came so hard.i have read a lot of stories on here since 2001 and yours are some of the most erotic I have read

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
enjoying the cum drinking

please, more stories of the girls savoring and enjoying daddy's cum in their mouths. very exciting to read how a young girl can take a load of sperm in her mouth, savor it, show it to daddy, then swallow it and ask for more. love it when daughter asks daddy, "can i suck your prick daddy?" and "drink your cum daddy?" more comments like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
HOT!!!!!

Please write more, a lot more.

ChrispeChrispeover 11 years ago
Erotic series

This series is one of the hottest I have ever read. Please keep up the great work and thank you.

OleguyOleguyalmost 11 years ago
I ask?

Where do I buy a set of daughters like these, What a joyous pair.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Amazing

This is one of the hottest stories I have had the pleasure to read here. You have an amazing talent, I am and have been hard while reading the whole set....Now what Hmmmmm.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow!

Twistedjoe37, what a premise-what a tale. Great read, thanks for sharing it with us!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Amazing.

You have to keep this series going. I have read it three times and its just awesome. Any thoughts on continuing?

twistedjoe37twistedjoe37over 10 years agoAuthor
re: amazing

Thanks, glad you liked the story. Right now I'm working on a sequel to "Cassie Colt-Legs" but I wouldn't rule out continuing this one at some time in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
DELICIOUS

I'm so glad you'e considering continuing this series as it's a favorite. You have the gift and keep us in thrall.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Oh so delectable

So interesting to find that the girls aren't using BC; soooo naughty. The story is so hot that I didn't really think so much about their blood relationship; it's kind of an after thought, until you bring in "maybe they'll be girls". That is what really opens up the can-of-worms. Really; dad getting 2nd gen pregnant, who would be 40+ years younger? If these two young women had boys; then they could continue the line. Of course either way; anomalies really are more of a risk when it's 2nd, 3rd, 4th gen continued. Of course if the girls had girls & boys!!!

When the series started; I didn't have any issues with their loving relations, but towards the end that was changing.

Thanks;

DKP

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Awesome

This was awesome you hard me hard from the start. my cock is is still wet at the tip with pre-cum

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent!

My only complaint is the unprotected sex. As the father of a girl who got pregnant [not by me; I was fantasizing about her friend, who I could have probably had if I had been willing to take a 15 year old girl when I was 54] I think it's a bad idea. It would have made a better story for me if he had fucked one then cum in the other's mouth, though licking the cum out of each other's pussy is even hotter. I'm trying to write erotic stories, but can't finish them. I have a good imagination for the sex scenes, though, and that's one of my favorites.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
The best!

This series is one of my favorites. It never fails to get me off!

Ducky7Ducky7about 9 years ago
Hot sexy fun

Loved it. I wonder what Mom would say if one of them got pg.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
I was with you till

the unprotected sex. That is just too irresponsible to excuse.

But, remembering what caused his divorce it shouldn't be a surprise.

MattAkerMattAkeralmost 9 years ago
@ rightbank and second to last anonymous

This is Literotica, a FICTITIOUS site filled with stories dedicated to FANTASIES... If you don't like something, that's fine, but don't bitch over realism or that something shouldn't be done in a STORY because of possible repercussions in REAL LIFE... Look at it as a stroke site for those fantasies you can't enact in reality, capisce? And to the poster, lovely story, a serious turnon. (And no, I wouldn't knock up my daughters in real life "rightbank", but reading about it is hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
rightbank

Should be ignored. He comes on here and feels entitled. He makes comments about how stories dont work for him assuming his opinion matters. I'd love to see him try his hand at writing, im sure his stories would go straight to the HoF. We could all learn from his mastery. Yeah right.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Gawd I love this story! I love rereading it every time I wander across it ;). You just cant go wrong with two hot daughters that want their daddy! Hehe.o

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Amazing

Part 4 Please..what if The sisters fall in love with their daddy? Honey gets jealous if daddy fuck heather, Heather gets jealous if daddy fucks honey my idea of a part 4...

Kudos !!!

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago
Hot, Hot!!

Damn that was so hot!! I can't wait for my man to get home so I can do him!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hot and wet

Thatvwas hot. My pussy is soaking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Movie

I feel lie this would be a fucking great movie!! I've read this story 100+ times and I still get turned on by it. Great job

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123almost 7 years ago
"Bathrobe Mornings Ch. 01, Ch. 02, Ch. 03" - Thirty-seven Year Old, Ten-year Divorced Father (Unnamed) of Two Daughters, Twenty Year Old Samantha ("Honey") and Sixteen Year Old Heather.

This three chapter story does deserve a Five Star Rating--it's that good all things considered. However due to my own personal rating philosophy I awarded the story with Four Stars, due to there not being a pregnancy of of any blood-related female. My feeling is that incestuous pregnancy(ies) is(are) the ultimate gift, reward and deep-seeded love that can be shared between a blood-related male and female. That said, my Five Star ratings are for the event(s) of those incestuous pregnancies. It might or might not be fair to the author but I do always explain. Some authors will not write pregnancies into their stories--even though they do broach the subject by using step-relatives or in-laws, or other teasing techniques. etc.

The "Bathrobe Mornings" characters are well developed, with and using charming, educated conversations. The theme, plot and chronology of events are well played out, throughout all three chapters. The romance, love and caring of "Honey", Heather and their father is special in every detail. Therefore, 'twistedjoe37' deserves accolades all around,

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
fuck off but nice

honestly, you sound like the biggest virgin there ever was because that is definitely not how sex works at all. also, why use the word "snatch" as an adjective as well as "mound"? we're not in the 70s hun. oh and by the way, virginity is not "truely lost after taking a man inside of you", if any penetration is involved at all (meaning the involvement of dildos, vibrators or other sex toys -even fingers) then you have officially lost your virginity. otherwise, your story had a good plot, was a funny read and was pretty descriptive but i'd suggest doing a lot more research. cheers. -not a triggered cunt just a normal, average, everyday cunt. X

KittenKatNDogsKittenKatNDogsabout 6 years ago
*Fan! Fan! Fan!!*

So hot! Well written. Going to read up your other submissions now. Loved it. Ignore that negativity above from, surprise, "Anonymous". Those are all opinions and not the way everyone sees things obviously looking at the other 50 plus comments. Do you, you do well! :D

MrBill36MrBill36over 4 years ago
Paradise

OMG, IF THIS COULD EVEN HAPPEN. Think your a gifted author. However, do like a lot of build up and explanation of foreplay. Also enjoy reading about eating pussy (because I enjoy eating pussy).

Thanks for an enjoyable read.

dirtyincestgirl2020dirtyincestgirl2020almost 4 years ago
Ugh

I'm so fucking wet ... such a perfect daddy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very intimate

It's funny how I thought all I thought about was having a man cum in me that I was only interested in sex with men but I came so hard in the first story when she climbed on top of her father with the open robe and her pushing herself towards her father I came so hard it was a mini shower that soaked my hair I. Spats of cum loud enough to hear my face and hair was covered in cum and I dared to eat it I was so glad to the taste was perfect creamy sweet and sour heavy on the cream now I know why my ex-wife wanted to feed on my cum.

Thank you again Joe.

Sparky69GASparky69GAover 2 years ago

I've got three words for you, ”I want more"

Dddysgrl14Dddysgrl14over 2 years ago

I would wear a robe and sit in my daddy’s lap. Reading your stories takes me back and I can feel his throbbing cock in me as we climax together

SouthTexasMan59SouthTexasMan59over 2 years ago

That was amazing. The story was just detailed enough, but not over bearing. The description of both the girls and dad for that matter was uncreditable. If I had an 18 year old daughters and the situation was like that, I guess I would fall into the trap. Its great to fantasy, but scary as hell to think about for real.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I felt sorry for Heather at the beginning

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[10.10.22]

Tres Romantique!

11/10!!!111

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

he is one lucky dad to have two hot sexy daughters that enjoy sex with him but he'll wish different when they get pregnant

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Really awesome ending. I Just loved your story ,

Rip142Rip1426 months ago

I think I’ll stop writing my own stories and just enjoy yours!

ToughSailorToughSailor3 months ago

Absolutely great story....until the specter of possible pregnancies reared it's ugly head . . . .

Rayvin75Rayvin75about 2 months ago

Immediatly added to favorites!! So fucking hot!

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