All Comments on 'Husband's Revenge'

Looks like she got screwed and he was cuckolded again.

Didn't look like any revenge to me......

decent story as far as it went. Where is his revenge????

This was a set up by her husband for revenge...where is the revenge? He got her drunk, set up, she took all comers?

I didn't read about any cameras, any remorse? She went home with him in the dark...dark - he didn't know?

Where is the revenge, all I read was him taking her to a party and getting her laid, seemed as though she liked it.

You wrote rather well so don't stop but - an Epilogue or chapter 2 to this story would complete the revenge aspect unless...was he a wimp or wuss and you didn't tell us.

Anyway, keep writing, you have a talent. Just answer all the W's.

I gave it a one because Lit. has no zero rating! Go find something else to do with your time!

Where? A gang bang set up by a fucked up hubby, whose revenge was to give his whore wife as much pleasure as she could handle before taking her home. You have to be a sicko to call this shit a story. Sure you might write English but you write English crap!

where was the revenge? Where was any logic?

Take your sick stories and stick them where the sun don't shine. You really need to get help!

If this is 'revenge' I would hate to see what the husband would do to 'punish' the wife. YIKES what a braindead writer.

His!!! No stars from me, even one is too much.

pure as yellow snow

I have a mate who LIKES some humiliation and some domination. What I do to humiliate and dominate her is make her find me some one to LOVE. It humiliates her. Makes her jealous. And hotter 'n Hades. Plus we gain a lover.

And just sex with the other woman doesn't do it for her. There has to be LOVE to get the full effect. So it doesn't happen often. But it is WORTH the wait.

This? Crap. The guy humiliated himself. I gave it one star just to keep the average down.

Actually I find the disconnect between the title and the story itself hilarious.

"And now, for the ultimate punishment! I'm giving you a million dollars! Take THAT!"

The title is obviously a hook to get Loving Wives fans to read a group sex/cuckold story.

Click on the link above to "Report Story". Tell the Lit moderators this story is in the wrong category. Seriously, the only reason this author posted in Loving Wives was to get a rise out of the people who watch the category ... seems like it worked...

No score is the best. Since Lit doesn't allow a negative, assigning any score at all infers acceptance. And complaining seems to be what the author wants. He's getting attention, right? Even negative attention is attention.

No comments and no score would seem to be the tools of choice here.

Don't score it. Report it by clicking the "Report Story" link and tell the moderators it shouldn't be in this category.

OMG! After that he took her home? Ok, he found out she cheated & his response was letting her fuck all of Kansas? With that logic I'll take a dollar from my grandfather. He'll give me one of his millions as revenge!

Wrong! Wrong! Wrong!

Please make it your LAST one. 1 star. There was no revenge.

But if they were rough with her, her pussy would be a bit battered and sore for a while.

With what the party sounded like, I can't see where she suffered any humiliation .

It was just a gang-bang and everyone watched and got horny seeing her take so much cock.

Now if this was at a church social I could understand the humiliation.

The story was well constructed, but the storyline fell apart, unless this was just the first chapter, and the husband was going to use the video as evidence in a divorce.

Thanks for the read

That was one of the worst stories I ever read.

sorry to say but it was crap

better luck next time

Hot story with exquisite irony. Husband's revenge blows up in his face. Very clever twist...thank you Jay Brooks, you have a terrific sense of subtle and sardonic wit!

be proud writer - you are now in that exclusive club of the few wimpy cock watchers into male humiliation / self disrespect.<P>

Feels good eh sicko.

I don't see how he got revenge. She got nailed by multiple guys but since she doesn't seem too upset by it then it really isn't revenge. Now if she got home and the house had the locks changed and her clothes packed and waiting out front that would be another story.

And OK drunk/rape/hubby revenge story. Nothing great here.

Gave it three stars just because it's apparently a first time poster.

I am shocked that the commentators on this site don't get the irony of this story. The husband's revenge/plan was to humiliate his wife at this party for her affair. His revenge goes so far as to "coach his wife" on how to handle her pursuer/stranger, and even plots with her pursuer/stranger as to how best to humiliate her. The husband's revenge backfires as she enjoys the fucking, discovers her G spot, is DPed and receives great applause. The last line has nothing to do with the night..."She headed home with her husband in the dark." The husband is oblivious (as are most of the commentators here). He was hoisted on his own petard. IRONICALLY, his revenge failed!

Is revenge giving her what she has sought out?

Enjoy the comfort of you own right hand idiot.

as to whether he got revenge. This story needs an epilog or sequel. TK U MLJ LV NV

The title is misleading and the story flawed. If the husband wanted to humiliate the slut, he would have done it front of her/their social circle, neighbours, family members, relatives etc. He wouldn't have taken her to a sex party where she would have been "humiliated" in front of a bunch of sex-crazed strangers.

Anyway, this utter pile of shite is one for the pro-cuckoldress AIDS spreaders...

Total Pile of SHIT--You sick cuck mother fucker

What? A jerkoff story. Total bullshit.

First he's humiliating her. Next someone else saw her elsewhere and knew how to screw her. Now he isn't there. Next she is gangbanging and then - finally - she is headed home - her husband in the dark?

Do us a favor. Write an outline and when you have all the facts, detail them in a story that makes sense.

This is childish mumbo jumbo - Grow Up!

The title of the story had nothing to do with the story, all the story was was the recounting of a cheating slut wife fucking six different guys at a party in front of everybody. There was no revenge.

Please no story just wanking material.

where is the humiliation in this he let her be fucked by multiple men was she spouse to feel bad she's a slut she enjoy every moment he permit it she except the opportunity he fail she win

Doesn't seem like much revenge either. More like the rape of a drunk. Maybe the husband should have just divorced the cheating slut. Letting her be raped doesn't make him much of a man. I won't even say that this was a worthless story to read. It wasn't really a story.

husband needed to reveal what he did

He divorces the cheating slut right? Never touching her again since her cunt is now filled with every disease known to man. This was a simply disgusting tale, even for fiction.

and what his wife told me. he's the biggest closet cuck on Lit! And she left him because he dresses in women's clothing and acts like a fag!! Oh wait he is one!! gave you a 5 for your great story

Needs more body to fill this tale for intrigue.

Why submit an unfinished story.....

is about to go a radical enlightment.. TK U MLJ LV NV

Certainly the husband couldn't complain about her as he new the rules and was taking part himself, what else would he/she be at such a party for, I assume that when they got home that they went to bed and fucked like rabbits.

Cuck shit.

More.like Br'er Fox threw Br'er Rabbit into the broad patch.

bitch got what she came for!

Or so I somehow came up with a cheap cigar, since both of my parents smoked at the time I thought I'd try it to see what the big deal was all about. I have never be so sick in my life, none of my friends told me not to inhale that thing and I still don't smoke. I don't think that lesson would apply in this story, rather it's much more likely to be as 26thNC advises. Signed: BTW

revenge my ass he gave what she wanted ,one stupid motherfucker.

1 for this story - very bad idea.

Holy shit was this a flaming ball of literary feces.

Husbands revenge? Sounds like Husband wanted to be a cuck and thats what he became.

Thank god you were one and done.

I see no husband revenge at all. A waste of time reading it. 0 stars.

Pure moronic shit

WTF?!?! Just pure shit. I give it 1 star because 0 stars won't move the rating. Was the resulting multiple fuck the husband's revenge? I'm unclear on that. I can't believe any man would do something like that. If this's the stories you're going to write, please don't.

The story was bad and you should feel bad. 1/5

Nato_

I thought the husband was going to get revenge for her cheating? All's he did was reward her with the best sex and orgasm she'd ever had, are you sure he did like being a cuckold??