All Comments on 'Repaying the Tab'

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e33boome33boomover 13 years ago
great story

Wow, this was completely original and so well done. I only hope this wasn't a one-off and there is a chapter 2 somewhere. Thanks for a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Cruel :-(

You know, power play is all very well, but I *really* dislike the way the bitch prevents him from orgasming for weeks on end. Thats especially bad if you consider that nature permits women to cum much more frequently than men anyway ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
tab?

I just got a little confused on what you were getting at at the very end. Good story though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome Stuff

This is so awesome. I think all the fantasy to this story really makes it so amazing. This is really amazing, I'm hung on every line.

ValensGirlValensGirlabout 12 years ago

I love this! Really sexy. :D The magic part of the story made it even better. Very cool. :)

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