Breaking Taylor

A Tour de Force!

It is difficult, if not almost impossible, to make an adequate comment on this work, but I feel I have no choice but to try.

From the dedication, which was a delight in itself, to the very last word, this incredible work of erotica held me rapt.

I cannot even begin to take individual parts to comment upon, as the whole is so much more than the sum of them, so much so that 5 *s seems pitifully inadequate as a score.

I notice, from your profile, that this is your first submission, at least under this name, to Literotica; I find it impossible to believe that you don't have a great experience of writing, and writing at a very high level. Indeed, if it were the case that you were a new writer, we may as well pack up now and hand the Laurel to you for permanent keeping!

I have never come across a work that is described as a 'Lead in' that has run to anything remotely approaching 125 000 words. It is, in short, an amazing accomplishment, of which you and the husband you dedicated it to, should feel extremely well-satisfied.

In closing, I realise that a work of this complexity and length must have taken a considerable amount of time, but I can also, with absolute honesty, say that I await your next submission with the highest of expectations; I hope I won't have to wait too long - my twilight years are close to hand!

Thank you again, turner28; this has been a great day for Literotica and its readers.

traci

More than I expected....

Fantastic story with great characters and suspense. I really love how you have laid out the story line with getting glimpses of the past while driving the story forward.

My only suggestion would be to split the story up into a couple of submissions. You may loose some people with the length.

Please keep on writing and I am waiting in anticipation for your next entry.

Really liked it!

Sure wish Taylor would get better at playing the mind games being played on her. But she's got one thing down, divide and conquer!

Great Work

I loved the work,.Well written with great suspense . Hope to read more of your great work.
Joe

Still reeling!

There were times when I was reading and felt exhausted from the length of the stress being applied, times when I thought she was stupid and other times valiant. A more than interesting tale provoking lots of introspection.
Thank you.

wow!!!!

i dont even know where to begin it was such a great story!!!!! i cant wait to read wat else u have instore for her!! there were times i just wanted to cry for her, it ws such an emotional story!!!! i loved it

Absolutely brilliant... I am beyond in love with this story. Very very well done. I can't wait to read any continuation you do. :)

wow

I loved this story I couldn't get enough I didn't want it to end.

Just discovered youv'e made this in to three novels .

Wonderful ....Reading Training Taylor now .........I was going to suggest that you just HAD to publish this but clearly someone beat me to it !

Changed my mind on this

Just re read this story and in hindsight it's just not sitting right with me .Taylor would be a mental wreck after going through even half of what those two put her through.Repeated rape has NO place in any B&D relationship .I can also see that no human being could possibly like never mind love someone who has mentally tortured someone as much as theses two have and even if David wasn't as vile at the end he was complicit in the barn episode and also in the sexual torture and rapes .Love is NOT making your partner bleed you've taken her so hard against her will.That's just plain abuse and sick.

Just plain abuse

Demeaning, degrading and humiliating. You don't even deserve to be called human being.

REALLY?

I notice some comments suggesting that no one could take such punishment this long. I can assure everyone that many have endured far more for a lot longer than indicated here.