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A lovely encapsulation
The best of your pieces today in my view - it has an appeal and something quite genuine in its empathy, as well as being beautifully formed as a poem.
Old?
It's just a word. I love this gentle, funny love letter. If t'were possible I'd give the five we're limited to but it's a 10 at least.
Tess
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Five.
Very sweet. Poet Guy can relate,
though when he and Poet Gal "get a room," it is usually to just get out of the house and watch a big flat-screen telly.
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I know just where you are coming from! Oh for the days before life got in the way and we had only one thing on our minds!
I adore this poem!
Good one fridayam! I am not technically an old fart yet (38) but I can relate cause my body is pretty much as clapped out as a sixty year old. This is a darling poem. It's getting a recommend.
Beautiful!
You nailed aging between lovers right on its head. I love this very much
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