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A very nice
beginning. Well written with a believable story line. I'll look for more.
*****
Nice start. Five stars.
Looking foreword ..
To more! 5 stars
As said- good start
It is a very nice beginning to a potentially great story. Yes, Miss Esperanza, you are a good erotica writer. We look forward to much more. Thank you!
i love it
I cant wait for updates on this. i have a feeling this is going to be a great story
Serving it Up Well
Looks like someone is working on dropping one hell of a tantalizing story on us. Wonder if Ronnie....oops Esperanza is going to be able to handle Mike's veterans savvy. And will Taylor ever find out....
Great start!
I agree with marbles29. This great beginning does have the potential to develop into a fabulous Interracial Romance. Looking forward to more from you and soon please!
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