All Comments on 'Penance Ch. 02'

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cherryontop1973cherryontop1973over 13 years ago
Love the idea of her getting him back...

Your story is very well written. I like the agression mixed with explanations to keep the reader from worrying it might be too painful. Keep it up.

needchocolatenowneedchocolatenowover 13 years ago
Excellent!

Very nice. I'm really looking forward to her payback. It seems like they may actually be made for each other. Sucker for a happy ending...

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