cant wait for big sis to come home for a holiday lol
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Anonymous09/10/16
I disagree...
After reading several of your stories, comments like those other ones above confound me and/or make me think they haven't read either your other works, or better works here on literotica. The reason I say this is simple, your stories are repetitive to the point I feel I'm practically reading the same one over and over, you could take any of the characters and put them into the other stories just fine, there's only slight plot differences. You seem to love making it so "every" girl in the harem deep throats the mc despite none of his previous girlfriends being able to, and despite how difficult such a thing is making deep throating (let alone cocks of these dimensions) seem like something every girl can do... furthermore you almost always do the "if we're fucking call me by my first name instead of aunt, mom, grandma" etc. It's getting to the point where I'm starting to roll my eyes when I read your stories now. The other thing you love doing is making everything convenient every damn time, making it so they're either virgins or in bad relationships or never had a good fuck or other similar things, there's never any struggle or any situation where they've had good sex but find his better, or are in a decent relationship but decide to try it anyway. If I read just one story of yours then maybe it'd be alright but after reading multiple it's just the same shit on repeat.
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Another great chapter
killer story
cant wait for big sis to come home for a holiday lol
I disagree...
After reading several of your stories, comments like those other ones above confound me and/or make me think they haven't read either your other works, or better works here on literotica. The reason I say this is simple, your stories are repetitive to the point I feel I'm practically reading the same one over and over, you could take any of the characters and put them into the other stories just fine, there's only slight plot differences. You seem to love making it so "every" girl in the harem deep throats the mc despite none of his previous girlfriends being able to, and despite how difficult such a thing is making deep throating (let alone cocks of these dimensions) seem like something every girl can do... furthermore you almost always do the "if we're fucking call me by my first name instead of aunt, mom, grandma" etc. It's getting to the point where I'm starting to roll my eyes when I read your stories now. The other thing you love doing is making everything convenient every damn time, making it so they're either virgins or in bad relationships or never had a good fuck or other similar things, there's never any struggle or any situation where they've had good sex but find his better, or are in a decent relationship but decide to try it anyway. If I read just one story of yours then maybe it'd be alright but after reading multiple it's just the same shit on repeat.
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