All Comments on 'Insomnia-Illustrated'

and "in the sully hands of slumber" is just wonderful. Great to see one of your illustrated poems again!

Holy crap. That pic made me lean back in my seat. Great poem. You can really write.

Marrying that picture to the poem is sheer genius just hope it doesn't give me nightmares tonight!

Jesus Christ!, Don't ever do that again! Just kidding. Gahh!

anyway

in the sully hands of slumber.

I like that line, high point

no real low points

100

I agree "sully hands of slumber" is a wonderful line. Shiver. x

Five.

...dismaying. The methodical structure make me think of tossing and turning. Well done.

if they were never lost. TK U MLJ LV NV