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Great illustration and the poem speaks to me
and "in the sully hands of slumber" is just wonderful. Great to see one of your illustrated poems again!
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Holy crap. That pic made me lean back in my seat. Great poem. You can really write.
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Marrying that picture to the poem is sheer genius just hope it doesn't give me nightmares tonight!
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Jesus Christ!, Don't ever do that again! Just kidding. Gahh!
anyway
in the sully hands of slumber.
I like that line, high point
no real low points
100
Fabulous Espie
I agree "sully hands of slumber" is a wonderful line. Shiver. x
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Five.
Wonderfully...
...dismaying. The methodical structure make me think of tossing and turning. Well done.
DREAMS CAN NOT BE FOUND
if they were never lost. TK U MLJ LV NV
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