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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone01/10/11

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nice turn
100

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by youngzero01/10/11

Lovely

Beautiful and
Lovely to read.

:)

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by fridayam01/10/11

Better

but still cramped by style. The last line doesn't scan, so negating the work you put in earlier. Do you say it out loud?

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by lostchicken01/11/11

This I can relate to!

It is clever, witty and very appropriate for so many on this site. Kinda reminds me of that ol' classic: Roses are red, Violets are blue and it stays in your head too (oh shame, I am starting to rhyme in my comments now)

On that note - thanks for posting sweetie.

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