by Bethyboo
I have similar fantasies to this story...can't wait for the next part...write soon!!
i was definately on the edge of my seat, wondering..
i thought it was great, and can't wait to read more please continue...
My public comment about 'Fear' is the exact opposite of the moron who managed to use a spel chekker and post the "predictable, not very erotic" comment. Hell, if you're that good, why're you terrified of hiding behind 'Anon'? Please don't comment on the work of a writer when you've still so much work to do on your delusions of adequacy.